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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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You can deny that you love me With that I disagree To refuse that we’ll be always Say’s you’re too blind to see There’s no way to reject us. No way to run away We’ve gone beyond lust Creating a new light of day. Don’t disrupt this feeling Filling yourself with pain Worried if it’s worth giving Will love always remain So don’t deny that you love me To your feelings you should concede Remember what you’re needing It will help guide you to see What could be. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Nice read spiked.Denial for some people is easier than the commitment. Enjoyed the read Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Excellent write!!! Don't deny your heart, take a risk!!! Good message  Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Spiked, an excellent message you have here. Take care, Rainydays |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you ron, peppermint and rainydays, It's easier to run and hide than face your fears sometimes. Rich |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
HHHMMMMMM...you make me think here...a dangerous thing...this is awesome...We’ve gone beyond lust Creating a new light of day. I love this line |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Funny thing about d'Nile...seems it flows both ways...d'pendin' upon yer attitude....I'll love ya always..that's the truth. so, later? guess I'll see ya on down the road....yer in my heart, no matter, which way the river flows....have fun. Loved ya then. Love ya now....peace.. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Paula Danger can be nice. Serene there are many faces to denial.we can deny many things but cannot deny what we feel to ourselves. ((Hugs)) Rich |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
spiked, I went looking for another piece of yours and ran across this one; YOU are a poet!!! This is a targeted poem but oh how well you deliver. Excellent on the delivery and wish I could find the other one it is equal if not exceeds this one. A fan....a grandmotherly fan and Honey, your cute picture isn't helping your beautiful poetry, who can read poetry looking at the likes of you, WWOOHHOOO!! and I'm old enough to be your mom so I can say that! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much compassion very nice to get a reply with such enthusiasm. to find poems by any poet on here all you need to do is search by name. again thanks Rich |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
*We’ve gone beyond lust* Wonderful if you can get beyond that..then it is a very special relationship indeed. loved your poem ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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