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looking Into Your Eyes
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looking Into Your Eyes |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Looking into your eyes I see, there's something special you see in me. And if I glance in long enough, I might feel a gentle touch. It's hard to catch your eye for long, you close them when I sing a song. But if you'd listen closely, you'd hear a special message from me, telling you to open up and let me see, so that I can tell we're ment to be. To know you is to love you, or atleast that's how this goes. I know you know I love you, that's just how the story flows. Looking into your eyes, is like gazing at the stars. Though you can't see them closely, they look wonderful from afar, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~ Allysa ~~ This is beautifully written! You can learn a lot by looking into a person's eyes, and you found love there.......yes, wonderful!  Follow your dream! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well this is a wonderful penned piece from your heart...enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey Allysa! Good job on this one, it has great feelings in it: ) "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allysa~ So good to see you !  Yep ... those eyes are the mysterious doorways through which we pass to enter the heart and the mind. Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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