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When I Think About You
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When I Think About You |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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When I think of sunny days Gaily running through the park Then I'm laying next to you Passionate kisses in the dark Here in this candlelit night Suddenly comes a gust of wind I hear you say it is allright Nothing like this comes to end When the only light remains Cut deeply inside your eyes Neither one of us complains Hearing other lovers cry When I think about you [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Walt, this is such an adoring poem Me likes reading this side of you Great write PoetFriend  Coco |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
luke when your uncle takes a look at those droids make sure it speaks coco baci or summin yuh thanky |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Doggies! This is pretty romantic like w.o.w. are you sure it's chocolate you been munchin on??? Very tender write~ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
where's walt? must be in a vault. his soul's been stole' by some gentle soul! must be a body snatcher (thank god it don't look like margaret thatcher) changed his style he must have gone wild quoting "I love you baby" He must have rabies foaming bubbles froth of phew or maybe just had to many brews or maybe...maybe...maybe.. oh yeah I think I know it, Just another side of the poet. then that's ok...nice read, cool to see the different facets of that gem of a mind. later |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
where's walt? must be in a vault. his soul's been stole' by some gentle soul! must be a body snatcher (thank god it don't look like margaret thatcher) changed his style he must have gone wild quoting "I love you baby" He must have rabies foaming bubbles froth of phew or maybe just had to many brews or maybe...maybe...maybe.. oh yeah I think I know it, Just another side of the poet. then that's ok...nice read, cool to see the different facets of that gem of a mind. later hey it posted twice...well two hits for yuh [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanky bdc and coulda been rfk !!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There ya go again... it's multisidedwalt...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
wayoutwalt - excellent writing you have done. Liked it very much. BC |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Way Out, this is way pretty. Every man needs his tender side, I think.  (laughing @ Ron's "Margaret Thatcher") Take care, Rainydays |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very lovely, walt! I really liked it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oh you guys thanky yuh |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
!pReTtY cLaSsY! i LiKe ThE pArT; "When the only light remains Cut deeply inside your eyes." i CaN fEeL tHe StReNgTh AnD dEpTh Of ThE gAzE! gottagojo |
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