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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2000-11-03 01:10 PM



Fire's Glow



The trees are strong
I know
I watched them grow
blowing in the wind
they became invincible
living on forever
it seemed
and yet,
they burn slowly
deteriorating
in fire's glow...
       Day by day
   prayer by prayer
moment by moment
    softly spoken.

I watched them fall
into little pieces
rotting in the garden
growing old
as life is ironic
that that which stood tall
now, should burn
and provide warmth
so we may live on
deteriorating
in fire's glow...
       Day by day
   prayer by prayer
moment by moment
     softly spoken.



-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-





[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 11-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Suzanne Arlene
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1 posted 2000-11-03 01:18 PM


That is a very good poem . I really enjoyed reading it . Suzanne
Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-11-03 02:19 PM


Bob, this is beautiful...wonderful...and strangely soothing...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



BSC
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3 posted 2000-11-03 02:19 PM


Wonderful poem Bob!  I never thought of a tree in that way before, but you can be sure I will the next time a log is put on the fire.  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2000-11-03 03:20 PM


Suzzanne,

Thank you for your compliment, I am glad that you enjoyed reading it.

Sunshine,

I am so glad that you are shining on me wherever I go...  It is strange. I don't know why, but a hot log on a flickering fire just seems to have that soothing effect.

Bonnie,

Thank you.  Those old logs just keep getting better as they cure outside in the sun... ...and they do provide the hottest and longest burning fires.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-11-03 04:44 PM


I enjoyed this very much! The things you
never stop to think about...but I'm so glad
you did   and then shared it with us~

Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2000-11-03 05:56 PM


Butterflies,

I actually got the idea for this poem quite a few years ago as I was trying to view life through the eyes of an elderly friend... Otherwise, I don't think I would have seen it either.  I'm glad that you liked it.

Rainydays
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since 2000-10-21
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7 posted 2000-11-03 10:05 PM


At first I wondered if you were referring to the "fire" of autumn, but after reading your comments, I can better appreciate your intended symbolism. A tender way of expressing this, I believe. Thank you ~

Rainydays

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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8 posted 2000-11-03 11:20 PM


Oh Bob this is just priceless. So full of wisdom and beauty.
Love to ya my dear brother,
Juls

Alle'cram
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9 posted 2000-11-03 11:27 PM


Bob, This is stunning!! You have written a piece of "Art".           Loved it...Marcy


Mark Bohannan
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10 posted 2000-11-04 01:26 AM


Not only do you bring us wondeful verse, but you bring with it, much ispiration, cause for thought, and wisdom in one of the ways of this life.  Excellent write my friend.
ethome
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11 posted 2000-11-04 01:30 AM


Lots of depth in this poem Bob more to it than meets the eye....the forces of nature are crying out to the sun for relief...we've got a lot to consider when we observe the wonderful beauty of a magnificent tree....good work!!...ethome
Lighthousebob
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12 posted 2000-11-04 01:54 AM


Rainydays,

Well, You do prefer the winter to the autumn anyway, right?   I am glad that the title got your attention and that you read on to find some symbolism which you could relate to....

Juls,

You are just that!  I am privileged to be know as your brother in the Lord Jesus Christ.  I believe that we will both shine as jewels one day in that Heavenly kingdom.

Marcy,

You do know for a fact that I appreciate you beyond words...  To me your replies are "stunning pieces of art" expressing a personal love and acceptance.   Thank you.

Mark,

You are such an excellent poet and such remarks truly humble my spirit.  Thank you for reading and even more for being my friend.

ethome,

You are right, there are emotions here that reach the realms of prophecy... I am glad that you had vision to feel them in your heart.  I do believe that there will come a time as such... "Fire's Glow."



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