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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Miracle" I am a firm believer now that miracles do come true I believe in them because I met you I believe that you and I will be together And now I believe in happy endings and forever You are my miracle, make me believe in what I can't see And you make me never give up, and always to believe in me But Angel of mine, I see the tears that you cry As each day we're not together passes us by Obstacles in the way, mountains standing tall Trying as hard as we can, only to hit another wall But then I think of you, my miracle, my love And I feel at peace, like a white flying dove So maybe we should throw caution to the wind, and think with our heart Perhaps, today is the day for a brand new start Because you have taught me miracles come true And I believe in them because I have you. ~Amy Kennedy~ authors note: this isn't very good, i know. sorry i'm having major writers block lately. thanks to all who read my work. love ya.  [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but it came from your heart, Amy, and that is what matters.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I believe anything anyone writes...even roses are red violets are blue...etc...is something good because you are sharing your feelings...which some people never do...so we are fortunate enough to get a chance to see you, inside of you, and so...no poem is not good enough...they are all gifts from the poet...and thank you vey much for sharing your gift it with us. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the only thing that matters is that you believe ... the rest will come in time ... and maybe your muse is off with that moody muse of mine... I'll bet they will show up tanned and rested ... WHY dont they ever take us when they go on holiday??? LOL love ya girlie-girl me |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Amy, this piece is full of tenderness and positive thought... I love it! Keep writing from your heart, keep singing from your soul. Take care, Rainydays |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must agree with Sunshine. . . it came from your heart. . .and that's all that matters. . . Those muses can be pesky can't they?  ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, These are your words and as such they are beautiful. As you are, as is your soul, you have an amazing ability to write truth, clearly and honestly. Just reach into the well of your feeling and let them flow. Amy this is as wonderful as it could be. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, this poem has given me hope. I love it and no its not stupid. It came from that huge heart of yours.  )Keep it up girl Love Always, Laura |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awe Amy girl...this is a beauty...you wrote it with heart and soul...that's what poetry is about..that's it and that's all..there are NO rules when it comes from there sweetie. As always it's a pleasure to read~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
See that, Amy? You can write incredible rhymes even with writer's block! I really liked it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mmmm muses have a tendency to do that at time's but hon it was what you felt inside and you expressed it well, that's the main point of poetry *expression of our emotions* well done I say Love ya and winged ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Poetry can be a very personal thing because you're sharing your innermost feelings and you hope the readers understand by relating this to their perspective on the same feelings. Poetry is always a virtual thing because we can describe a beautiful flower but we can't really smell it or pick it or touch it.But we can call to the readers mind the times when they experienced the same feelings. You have done this here with no inhibitions and of course it draws the poetic reader close to you. It's like every reader sees and feels the same thing from their own perspective.... very well done!! great poem!!.....ethome |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your beautiful and heartfelt replies. i will thank you all by name tomorrow. i am sick, got a touch of the flu right now and am going to bed. but i wanted you all to know that each of you is an Angel in my eyes and i care about you very much, and to you sweetheart...i love you! Amy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Amy, how can you say, your thoughts, beliefs and feelings are not good? hmmm. What you have done here it pen is beautifully! a beautiful write, straight from the heart, I enjoyed it. Maree< !signature--> "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You wrote from your heart there is nothing sweeter. I do to believe in miracles. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I too believe in mirakels...you brought something back up in my memory. you have penned this with your heart, and I love the hope in it...well done. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Isn't it funny - when we think we haven't written anything very great -but we did it from the heart- and everyone recognizes it and responds...Surprise! it is great! |
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