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It ain't love
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It ain't love |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I hear lot's of younger guys talk about being a "playuh' and they do not accept the responsibilities of their actions,,,love is not a game...and there are serious consequences...like pregnancy and aids...but this is my dipping into the mind of a playuh Loves a game, So I’m just playing If you don’t know why, I’m not saying I’m a lady slayer with a full hand playuh Run my harem like I’m the mayor Don’t say you love me, you won’t get that back from me There'll be no ring. Just a fling, don’t try to clip my wings. This bird can’t sing in a cage. So now you know the deal let’s make it real It ain’t love I’m moving through your mind Like a scream dream on the screen I’m larger than life You can’t fight I’ll be a nightmare if you try so hold tight Whether you’re movin’ or snoozin’ you know you’ll be losin’ I’m there In your hair You scream it’s not fair It ain’t love I know you want love But once you had it .Your always gonna want it Ican’t give it No touchy feely Oh how I miss you want to kiss you I’m just a quick hit You won’t see me coming. Then I’ll be running Leave something baking in the oven Don’t want responsibilities So don’t charge me for the seed ‘Cause then you’ll need, make me bleed, won’t let me free So its play or be played So run or let’s get it done, It ain’t love. Don’t stand there looking at me. Your eyes can see Do something or do nothing I’m a magnet, you got the nails Scratch my back Don’t slack Get the groove back on track and Play it You give it up but I don’t pay it Give a little, give a little, take a lot From the pot. It’s cooking, but no looking Just close your eyes and make believe its love Look for those feeling somewhere else Dig in those pockets, hock it, just give it. There’s nothing to it. Cause it ain't love. < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: thanks for putting this up...now, if we could just get the playuhs to read...something akin to taking a horse to water, correct? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An interesting poem..I know the feeling...I was like this when I was 18 and I wanted to see how many I could score.. I think I was pretty easy to figure out as most players are. I know some women that are player too but that would be another poem.. I think the one's that have it down to an art...they know just the right words to say and all the tricks to mislead and deceive...these are the one's that break hearts. James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ron, this is an awesome write my friend... You've rhymed the tale of a 'playa' quite well...  Coco |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ron, this is a very good write from a player's point of view...I hear and see that word all around and I know I see it in this forum...but I'm not mad though..I'm just gald that someone finally stood up to those egomaniacs! Take care, Nathan |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ron.... This is great!! yeah.....playuhs have been around a long time, and they come in all ages and types. You got this one down, my friend. Did I tell you that it would make a fantastic Rap cut?  Follow your dream! |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Thanks sunshine...you know you're right James, I know or knew guys who believed the quantity was better than the quality...how wrong they were Coco...Thank you for your comment...I enjoy your poems as well Thank you for stopping by nate...appreciate you taking time and I don't know if anyone (playuhs)will listen to this Sunny, your always so supportive...I thank you the most Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
players..yeah right they always score with a heartbreak sigh. you have describe them so well... well done... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Man, I can't even begin to count the fantastic lines in this one!! Great writing, Ron. You would make a great rapper....  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Right on the head Ron!!! This is really well done....and I must agree, it would make a fantastic rap song!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
let me add congrats on a great (sad) poem - and my agreement with 'deer - too many great lines to count - let alone recount |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh dear, can't believe my eyes, have I just read a "disclaimer"?  disclaimer or not, it is a GREAT read and thoroughly enjoyed smiling..ya bad! ya bad! Marcy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It's a darn good writer, that can get into someone elses space, and write as though he is there. I knew men like this, one in particular, in my early 20's. Real bad news for the woman.. Great poem. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ron K, this is a very very brilliant poem. I think everyone has met someone like this, the player, not the stayer, the destroyer not the builder. Beautifully put, this is really good. Ace.  Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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