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Alone on the Sweet Lays of Abandon
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Alone on the Sweet Lays of Abandon |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Through the binoculars of time Beyond pastels of sweet mint crème With bits of earthdust trailing forth A starlet from an angel’s dream A flagon of flame the dragons She tames regale her fiery mane Jump in the pools of the golden Thread spools and retrace her lover’s lane The clouds spell a spiral staircase The steps are high as if for child I must find my way two by two Into the boat naked she smiled And days can pass forever down To the last inch found in the worm That I stepped on and split in half There’s two of one serving this term Ashore on the sweet lays of Abandon Alone and never to see The two shells that still will play The ballad of my mistress and me [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nice ballad, Walt Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey there Walt  fantstic read my friend...enjoyed all the whileTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The romantic side of you....wow...I'm impressed W.O.W. great writing~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is about how mushy walt will ever get without falling off the wagon again or getting back on it or what ever yuh thanky |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
hey walt...this a beautiful poem...really like it. you're just a mushy guy after all.yuh! Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ron come here for kisses |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You givin' out kisses without me, walt? HEY. I didn't think this mushy--it is a beauty, walty, loved the lyrical depth!!! Hang in there, m'friend! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love seeing this other side of you too..funny..now serious and romantic..not mushy..what else can a girl ask for ?  haa..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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