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Taking Wing
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Taking Wing |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Taking wing As inhabitants of skin held to ground by mass and gravity, it is natural for boundaries to congeal visually. How is it then, that you can fly, face framed by sky, above, beyond and through us in such sweet chorus? Your acumen has expanded while we remain static, narrow in focus as the horse tethered sweating, slaving steam rising as one hoof follows the other. Oh to be rescued from all this. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Brilliant verse Corinne, "oh to be rescued from all this." Smooth. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Kethry! Corinne |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent....I'm ready to take wing myself! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ I feel a Peter Pan moment coming on !  Thanks, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Corrine, an amazing write you once again pen I truly enjoyed this read Coco |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your work always has a way of reaching out...a style all your own that no one could Mask...that's why it's a treasure!! Beautiful work~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you did it again - and with your inimatable unique style - bravo!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful read, Corinne! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poem Corinne!! I love how you lead the reader into thought with so few words...very nicely done and a pleasure to read....ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How is it then, that you can fly, face framed by sky, above, beyond and through us in such sweet chorus? Your acumen has expanded while we remain static, narrow in focus ================== how cool is this....WAY cool ... indeed.... jm |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for all your wonderful comments. Greatly appreciated! Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Simply elegant. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, this piece makes me think of the freedom of the soul when released from earthly bounds. Always love your style of writing, it sure makes one think real hard. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Seymour and Park! Corinne |
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