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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-02 01:52 PM


I remember strolling in the Indiana rain
and the candlelight dinners we shared
a memory not too long ago
still sets my heart aglow
as i remember making love with you

Poems of Erotica ..a gift you gave me
and  book of poems called Happiness
the cover crafted with.. mulberry leaves
and  petals that had fallen from the trees
your fingerprints..only my eyes can see

This is what I have left of the Indiana rain
and the incense of jasmine in my mind
how many times have i drifted
to the Indiana rendezvous?
how many times tracing
those four wonderful days with you




A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-11-02 04:12 PM


"and book of poems called Happiness
the cover crafted with mulberry leaves
and petals that had fallen from the trees
your fingerprints only my eyes can see."
Touching words sounds like lovely memories..James

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2 posted 2000-11-02 04:17 PM


Victoria ~ Sigh ~ What incredible images this brought to mind....and I love the title, ooooh, those "mulberry memories."  Bonnie
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3 posted 2000-11-02 05:26 PM


James and Bonnie.. thank you so much..yes lovely memories James and i am glad Bonnie i could paint some lovely images for you.

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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4 posted 2000-11-02 06:12 PM


your fingerprints..only my eyes can see

A love so special a memory so special, only you can see what no one else can. beautiful as always.  Ron


Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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5 posted 2000-11-02 07:46 PM


thank you Ron..so glad you enjoyed..and I appreciate for visit.

                      ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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6 posted 2000-11-02 08:04 PM


I remember so many things, you have captured that feeling so well.
Sandra

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7 posted 2000-11-02 09:41 PM


thank you Sandra..im sure you remember many things too...HUGS  

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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