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Holding Each Snowflake
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Holding Each Snowflake |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Holding Each Snowflake ~*Marge Tindal*~ When a new quilting of snow lays glistening across the lawn I will dance with joy upon it making footprints of memory that lead you back to me And you will follow and find me waiting We will frolic full of merriment in this season of love We will tumble through chilled days - warm nights drinking in the memories of sweetly wintered bliss Holding each snowflake in sweetest remember knowing that spring will bring the melt that will change our lives forever Footprints gone Hearts apart anxiously awaiting a new quilting snow ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge this is a real beauty.....I love it.... and seeing the form that you create with this one seems like a beautiful dress, think it fits you wonderwel. excellent penned as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Each memory...each moment so precious as each delicate flake...each unique and beautiful on it's own but together creating a blanket of warmth to cuddle up into...sorry I guess I got lost in your rhyme my friend  Beautiful weaving Marge...I loved it! Love~n~Hugs to you! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quilting of snow...lovely images, but nothing less from you, ever... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love your wintered bliss  I just wrote my first one for winter as a sonnet (yesterday) but I need to make some corrections on it..hopefully will post it later today. This was a treat.~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Thank you. I hadn't thought of the 'dress' ... think I'll try it on ! ButterfliesDC~ Glad to have you 'lost in the rhyme'. Thanks, hon. Hugs n' love back at ya' ! Karilea~ Thank you, gal. Wynter~ I appreciate your read. Will look forward to that sonnet. ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, a real beauty, an absolute gem. I really love this one. Never anything less than lovely from your pen. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Lovely work as always, Marge. I liked the idea of footprints in the snow leading your love back to you. Are you looking forward to the first snowfall? Anyway, beautiful sentiments here. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah marge, your imagery continues to enchant.. jwesley |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this left memories swirling around me......loved this  -SEA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...I found this as invorgating as a barefoot run in the snow Lovely!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
so many kinds of snow - each beautiful in its own right - white powder - large wet flakes - melting on your tongue Crystal beds of white calling to envelop us and make angels. Wonderful imagery you've givin us Marge |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Marge ~ "A new quilting of snow" ~ How beautiful, this just bring wonderful images to mind. And when we get 18" dumped on us in a few hours this winter, I will look out and say "look at the lovely quilting of snow!" And of course everyone here will look at me like I'm nuts, but I'll know what I'm talking about, and I'll be sure to let you know when that "quilt" arrives!!!! Bonnie |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is very vivid and beautiful, Marge...great poetry as always. Nathan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Snow can be so beautiful...it sure sounds lovely in your poem...but...give me SUNSHINE...to lay in ..love your poem's loving snowthoghts! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I love your delight ! Elizabeth~ LOL @ first snowfall ... Honey, Florida is just my style ! Thank God I'm a poet ... I can write about it instead of living in it. JWesley~ Thank you so much. Hoot~ Brrrrrrrrrrrrr ! Wilfred~ Or just seen through the eyes of a sunny poet ! Bonnie~ Oh, my ! Not to sound uncaring ... but glad it's you and not me ! Nate, my friend~ Thank you again for the visit. Martie~ Oh ... yeah ! Me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Simply stunning! Marge! this is just beautiful. It could well be my favourite, well until your next one anyway. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
When a new quilting of snow lays glistening across the lawn I will dance with joy upon it making footprints of memory that lead you back to me And you will follow and find me waiting We will frolic full of merriment in this season of love We will tumble through chilled days - warm nights drinking in the memories of sweetly wintered bliss Holding each snowflake in sweetest remember knowing that spring will bring the melt that will change our lives forever Footprints gone Hearts apart anxiously awaiting a new quilting snow ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Marge~ This is an awesome piece, absolutely devine my friend....just love it Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Thank you, sweet poet friend. Tracie~ It pleases me just knowing you enjoyed it. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ah snow, wonderful snow. And a wonderful hope built around it. Just lovely Marge. Love & hugs, Juls |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yeah - That's easy for you to say - sitting there in the middle of all that red dirt!!... I'm sending you some northern snow this winter..  This is beautifully done, of course... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ Thank you for traipsing my snowflakes. Nan~ Tee-Hee ! And - DON'T YOU DARE !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow, what a great flow you've got here. It curves right off your tongue when read aloud ( i know cause i tried it ) good job!"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
No matter what you do in your poems, it always sounds like so much fun, and this brought a smile. Your exuberance never wears off. Have fun in the snow, Marge! Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saxoness~ I'm tickled to hear that you tasted this one ... Thank you so much. Elizabeth~ I do have a tendency to have fun ! But ... I'm not ready for tromping in the snow ... just yet ! Thank you for the sweet reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is spectacular! As usual, Marge, your awesome talent amazes me! And this time, the emotions tuck into my heart too. Beautiful. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Marge, O-Boy! This is fine! Loved how you weaved your love in and out of the snow. Just beautiful, good write. Heart Talking Woman "I will dance with joy upon it making footprints of memory that lead you back to me" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So instead of leaving just footprints in the snow, can we lie down and make snow angels together? Love the thought of the white powder being in control of memories that two can share in a magical season. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ Thank you, hon. Glad to know you are tucked in. Marcy~ Thanks for loving the weave. MarkB~ Now my heart is happily melting. Hello, love. Glad to see you here. I see you followed the footprints. *Hugging you* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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