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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway 
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Fatigued Tired I stumble around, blinded by fatigue, not really knowing why i stayed up, but I'm feeling rather weak. I have played around on news and on IRC, I have enjoyed countless mails, but I'm feeling some fatigue. Was it worth it? Morning arrives and workingbees pops up everywhere, they point and looks at me knowingly, while I am feeling weak. They laugh and jokes at me while I shuffle past, I answer them plainly, "Yes, no sleep", and wonder if I can last. Did I forget how it was? I work some hours, and wonder how I manage, I keep pushing myself on my way, but I'm feeling much fatigue. I doze in my chair, and wake up every quarter, I quaff coffee, if i can, but I'm dying unless I sleep. Zzzzzoo fatigued -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
me too. Dream sweet. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.....boy did I feel this one!!! Nice job, and you hooked me on the title!!! Some of us spend too much time in here looking at the screen and this is how we end up!! Great poem.......but now I'm going to take a nap.........  Follow your dream! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is so easy to become tired, I have felt so drained lately myself, but it is the seasonal change for me and the first month or so of less sunlight does that to me. Hope you get rested up soon.  ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Definatley been here....enjoyed this!!!! Take Care, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
The result of technology. Being alone and not at the same time seems to have bocome the norm these days. Nice Poem Rich |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I sure can relate to this ...I 've been right there in the same place....good idea for a poem and good work!! |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Well, I'm still being bad to myself.. Another sleepless night. I both hate and love the net.. Argh!! Thanks for feedback. =) -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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