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Manda_1982
Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 24
Washington State,USA

0 posted 2000-11-01 11:39 PM



My eyes find yours,
Deep stares overtake my soul.
I am lost, lost within myself,
Lost within you.
A smile broadens across your face,
True happiness is known.
I feel your hand caress my cheek,
Your fingers play across my lips.
Our mouths inch closer,
Your lips dance onto mine.
Tongues intertwine and tangle,
Our sweet breaths mix.
I close my eyes,
But I still see only you.
It ends,
We pull away.
I smile sweetly at you,
You nod and smile back.
You whisper “I love you,”
My head spins.
My heart flutters,
My world is light.
And I begin to dream,
Of our next kiss.



© Copyright 2000 Amanda Young - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-11-01 11:42 PM


It is wonderful when we first fall in love...and especially when each kiss is as good as the first. Lovely read.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
2 posted 2000-11-01 11:44 PM


Yes, a beautiful poem about the first bunch of kisses!!  I love it!!

sp  


Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-11-01 11:54 PM


Must be the kissing season--- could it be  the approach of winter ( for us North Americans)-- Nice one here


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-11-04 04:39 AM


Cause your kiss, your kiss, is what I miss when I turn out the light.
Their's a song sung by Israel Kamakawiwo'ole...called Henehene Kou 'Aka (hawaiian) and the words are about getting that first kiss...some of the words are
"Our eyes have met
our lips not yet
I'm going to get you yet.
for you and I
I'm gonna get you yet
How much you wanna bet."
He sings it really in a fun style with ukulete in the background..its a beautiful song in Hawaiian and American...James

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