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Open Poetry #10

Winter's Apparel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-11-01 09:54 PM

Winter's Apparel

The way I see this...
is that it must be wonderful
to sit in judgment

I'm sure you believe
you're safe and
comfortable there
with a wall to protect
you from the elements
of winters harsh chill

Someday, maybe I'll give it
a try. Putting on a
pseudo suit of
someone who has
a compassionate heart
Writing of a life I've
never experienced

But then again...
I have better taste...
in clothes

Snow
11/00

Voice Recording

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-11-01 09:58 PM

Lovely verse, nice closing and a sound link to boot! Thanks for posting this.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

2 posted 2000-11-01 10:33 PM

Neve, the words, the voice -- ''the tone''
I love it all. ''Like a ball of fire''

Robert Joseph
~enb~

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-11-01 11:30 PM

Putting on a
pseudo suit of
someone who has
a compassionate heart
Writing of a life I've
never experienced

We do live lies, don't we. Nice sharp read.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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