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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Lovers' Race As the sun lifts her sleepily drowsy head Your feathered touch awakens me in your bed As dawn paints her glorious morning skies My love, I see reflected back within your eyes Your body heated in passion's furnace flame Feel my skin I'm burning for you just the same The feel of you moving against my satin thigh My breathing quickens to breathy pleading sighs Heatbeats speeds up as the tempest builds apace Slower my love, you whisper, this is not a race The pleasure erupts in colours of rainbow hue As I soar on through heavens gates with you The touch of your lips makes my soul take flight Your face bathed by the suns early morning light With each moment the flames mount ever higher Oh beloved, come with me into the burning fire I'm calling you to answer this my siren's song Follow me, come to that place where we both belong The stars implode at last behind my delighted eyes As I reach my goal, Oh!, with a final breathy sigh A heatbeat, less, behind your shuddering Oh my! Breathing slows, you wipe the tears from my misty eye We lay contented, sated in lovers' intimate embrace As we plan together our next lovers' honeyed race Marsha (Sorry SEA there's nothing Mushy about this one) Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ I would have to agree!!! Hot erotic sensual and ohhhhhh I LOVE IT!! Holy crap! This is now my favorite from you.....Whew....my hubby is so in for it tonight!!!!  OH YEA! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is stunning! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Tremendous boiling passion filled with erotic pulsating desire.....a potpourri of inflamed driving biolgical servitude to the senses. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
umm, I think I need to change your title to "Mistress Marsha"... well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, I can do pretty, I can do mushy, but I think I do hot a whole lot better. Just watch, I think there's a lot more heat in here. Glad you love this one, and I bet your husband 'likes' it too. I know my special someone will, in fact I can guarantee it. Mmmmmm? Now be good, but not too good!!  Mushy Kathleen, so you like?  Ethome, it is isn't it! Kari, Mistress surely not, I've only just started to warm up. Glad you like it love! Just wait until I really get going. This will do for the start though. I like to build up gradually don't you? Take care Marsha < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Welll, if you are just getting started, you will have to move into adult for the next one..  Great, I remember this, it was nice... And thanks for your support recently. Sandra |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 *WOW* getting  loved it. Charisma |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow!!! You're not hot, you're burning up!!! This is a wonderful, sensual write!!! May be lots of somebody's will be compelled to "come together" because of the feelings stirred by this poem!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra, thank you, I'm pleased that it brought back some happy memories. As for the support, you are very welcome. After all we have all been in your place, and it can get very cold there. Take care Jon, warming up nicely I think! Thank you Charisma, why thank you, I do like a nice fire don't you! Peppermint, I can only hope so! Mmmm must have something to do with the storms here? No probably not, it's my special someone. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Well now Ms Marsha this is really something. Goodness graceous great balls of fire...lol. Wow I enjoyed this way too much...lol. Hugs, Juls |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juls, you did, really? I'm so glad, and if it warmed you up then perhaps some of the heat peeped through. As if! Thanks Juls, I appreciate you dropping in. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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