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Laundry Day |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Autumn comes and goes.. just like you spinning through my mind a whirlpool.. memories blue fluttering on the clothesline memories..a bold tattoo Shouting you out of my sheets bleaching you out of my bed no soft downy words no more pillow tears shed No more tumbles in the sack and no more agitation hanging you out like a scarecrow as neighbors watch in fascination A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your sadness is very well expressed. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your sadness is very well expressed. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh its just a poem Elizabeth...hanging out to dry haa..thanks for your two responses haa...  < !signature-->A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Great poem Victoria, love the whirlpool, bold, downy and shout...but where's the tide, and surf and ...... Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i thought a bold tattoo would look better then a tide one ha..thanks hon...well back to my laundry..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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