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“If Only….”
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“If Only….” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 If only I could see your face… If only I could cross this space… between us… If only I could kiss your lips… Caress you with these fingertips… so gently… If only I could hear you say… your love grows stronger every day… and always… If only I could be with you… I’d make all of your dreams come true… forever… If only in some distant time… we’ll meet, we’ll know, and then we’ll find… a lifetime… If only…just two simple words… that from my heart take flight, like birds… to find you… I’ll wait for you, as I do now… my heart responds in silent vow… ~ to love you ~ ~ But if only ~ ~ If Only ~ Follow your dream! |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Sunny, this is a beautiful poem, makes the heart aflutter...If only...ah, beautiful. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Sunny1 ~ Such a beautiful poem, yet I could almost hear the ~sighs~....and I could definitely see them in the eyes of the little girl...great picture! Bonnie |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Ron ~~~ Thank you for reading this one, and I'm glad you enjoyed it......sort of a wistful kind of thing, but we all have those moments!! ~~~ Bonnie ~~~ Yes, she does have that longing look on her face.....a sigh in her heart! Thank you!!  Follow your dream! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny, this is wonderful! A most lovely graphic! I hope this finds you feeling better? {~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Thank you, my friend....and yes, I am doing better. "Today all things begin again", and they begin with a smile in the heart! Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lil sis, this is perfect, Ah! If's onlys' and what if's, utterly beautiful, you are soooo talented sis really. I love this one. How are you, still better I hope. Take care of yourself Bubbles  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny- this is absolutely beautiful, and so full of love. wonderful.  love the graphic too. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful picture of a darling little girl. enjoyed your sweet poem Sunny.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marsha ~~~ Thank you, big sis!! Yes, life certainly has a lot of 'if only's'! And thank you, I am doing fine....I didn't even eat any Halloween candy last night!!!! ~~~ vicky ~~~ Hi, and good to see you here, my friend! Glad you liked this one, and the picture. I thought that she just looked as if she was wishing for something special! ~~~ Victoria ~~~ Thank you for joining me here to take a read! Always good to see you, and I'm glad that you enjoyed the picture. I was quite taken with it, also.... Follow your dream! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ heartfelt, sad, and romantic and pulled out some *SIGHS*...Loved this. -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This is such a lovely poem. 'If only can be, and often is, one of the saddest phrases ever uttered. I wish you more smiles in your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ SEA ~~~ I am glad to see that you enjoyed a few 'sighs' here! It is a bit wistful, but young girls always are, and sometimes so are the older ones!! Thank you!! ~~~ Marge ~~~ Oh, thank you for your always sweet reply, my friend! I am smiling at this very moment! Follow your dream! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Only If-- you really mean it....--- --- lovely poem S-oneJamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Jamie ~~~ I am a happy poet, Only if....I have fellow writers like you, my friend! Follow your dream! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's as beautiful as you are, young lady! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Kathleen......you are a true Irish Rose, sweet and giving in both spirit and heart! I thank you so for your lovely reply, my friend......I really do! Follow your dream! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny...once again you write my soul...if onlies have been plaguing me lately...glad you are smiling twin of my heart |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sunny, pure magic my friend. Just beautiful. Hugs, Juls |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That great big word IF again..lovely way you expressed your IF. I enjoyed the read very much and if only you would keep on writing and sharing this........IF only..take care ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"my heart responds in silent vow" what a beautiful line that is. very lovely writing Sunny... take care jm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such a tender heart woven piece Sunny...I loved the graphic...combined with your words it's perfection~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Paula ~~~ Wishful thinking is one of my seemingly favorite pastimes. Oh well!! I guess it's ok to daydream......thank you, my twin!! ~~~ Juls ~~~ A little bit of magic is good for the soul!! Thank you, and it's good to see you here! ~~~ ethome ~~~ Ahhh...thank you, and I hope to keep on writing....if only my computer keeps on working!! Ha!! ~~~ JM ~~~ I'm glad my muse was inspired to provide me with that line, also. I thank you for your reading and reply, my friend!! ~~~ Butterflies ~~~ Thankyou for your kind words, and I'm glad you liked the graphic. The little girl just reminded me of myself when I was about 9. I always enjoyed daydreaming! Follow your dream! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya SUNNY1, I read your rhyme it sings to me of a dream or a wish whatever the day is the song is the same 'IF only'... I adore the expression here as well as the sweet rhyme... As always, you've touched my heart with your pen PoetFriend Coco |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Coco ~~~ Oh so good to see you!! And I really am glad that this poem touched you, as that is what makes writing puposeful. I do thank you, my fellow Scorpio friend....(a belated Happy Birthday, BTW!!) Follow your dream! |
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