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Let Go, Let Go
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Let Go, Let Go |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Only through burning vision can I see clearly now remembering every word I leave them all somehow Only through the storm can I break away from rain move on, and wash it off a raw and bleeding stain Perhaps in another time love shall renew my path for once I loved so totally now, facing aftermath You drew me in and loved me or was it all a lie It haunts me even still in non-belief, I cry For fear ruled your emotions and stifled all the joy I wanted a man to love I let go now, of this boy let go let go |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Yes, sometimes we grow up and they stay the boy who's not ready to commit. Hopefully you will find the man of your dreams. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Emily, a heart tugger this one is and a great write too! The verse that struck a chord with me the most is "Only thru the storm can I break away from rain" Enjoyed the read  Coco |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ooooooo nice conclusion to a fine poem yuh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So many ways to say I loved you and you didn't love me...hope you find one to share a dream...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's what we have to do Emily. . . wonderful poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
It may be hard, but it must sometimes be done. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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