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Open Poetry #10

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-11-01 12:01 PM

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Symmetry soles my feet
My deli belly full
Yet I bugle retreat
And sadly haggle doubtful.

Where the sun saints my face
The clouds paint the sky blue
The wind offering chase
Yet still, I choose askew.

The Meadow's new of song
Birds lend tune to the trees.
Pains of the city gone
And yet I am not free.

What collar holds the dogma
Leashes the ennui
Shapes the sculpting sculptor
To see what he will see?

And what drive holds survive
What polls the toll of thrive?

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-11-01 12:06 PM

...only the answers that you will find in your heart...or in a lover's eyes...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2000-11-01 01:21 PM

Sunshine,
If you say so. *L*

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2000-11-01 03:29 PM

I love the way you write.

corinne

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2000-11-01 10:14 PM

Corinne,
Thank you sweet corinne.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2000-11-01 10:17 PM

I think sunshine nailed it down, my friend; enjoyed this read.

jwesley

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