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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-11-01 04:12 AM


I want...
to write
(I want to write)
to transform
word to paint...
(I want)
to feel
your hand in mine
as I walk
the poet's lane.

I want to touch
each part of you--
I want the
trace
of thing renewed...

(I want to live
inside of you...
a timbre
of your voice-I knew...)


I want the taste
of your tears
the bitter waste
of golden years

I want the solace
of the keys--
I want the yearning
of my knees...

I want...
I want...
I want... alone...

I want,
I want,
I want...a home.

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-11-01 05:06 AM


I want the solace of the keys, enjoyed your list, serenity...I want some of the same things, I hope you attain them,

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-11-01 05:51 AM


Your longing is evident sweet serenity, You have expresed yourself clearly.    winged ~HUG~ floating your way
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-11-01 07:17 AM


Serenity~

In this mansion
on Poet's Lane
You've taken the pen
to write your name

Through the halls
of poetic roam
YOU, my friend
have
  come
    home

*I like, as you continue to inspire.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-11-01 07:59 AM


I want...
to write
(I want to write)
to transform
word to paint...
(I want)
to feel
your hand in mine
as I walk
the poet's lane.
I want to touch
each part of you--
I want the
trace
of thing renewed...

(I want to live
inside of you...
a timbre
of your voice-I knew...)

==================
you already do....
you've been doing it for a long time...
your poets pen is the only key your gonna need me thinks
me loves ya when ya want...when ya write
me just loves ya  
me
(me needs tea)intravenously..YAWN..
is it morning already... lol

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