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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-11-01 01:58 AM



For all the veins I drained tonight
Still taste the blood from that first bite
I’ve craved this time, to take control
Your silky touch, the heart you stole

A piercing scream, the burning strain
Your soul is mine, the marks remain
The symbol of the life consumed
I take you to your very doom

To feed myself this one more night
And live this life’s eternal fight
To stay one step ahead of death
I’d take it all, your every breath

I’ve felt the fires of this hell
Condition thought of which I tell
And seek the next that I’ll consume
Don’t close your eyes I’ll be there soon
Beware

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-11-01 02:04 AM


Y'know...I did somehow sense that...and be wary on this night...forget the crede? Returns three times three...

"and as ye harm none, do what you will..."

hugs and love to you, as always, rich.

*wink*

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-11-01 07:40 AM


Spiked,
Thanks for the warning, great poem.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-11-01 11:28 AM


My throat lies bare for the feel of your kiss
That first sharp bite of passions bliss
I'll not shy away on this dark night
So take me with you on your vampires flight


spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
4 posted 2000-11-01 01:16 PM


Seren Thanks but might enjoy nine times the pleasure.
Kethry Thank You
Paula Your offer is well stated, Thanks

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