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to call you friend |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Let me kiss you once goodbye... Let me breathe you into sighs... If only love would be my friend... I'd whisper once whisper again... and oh how travelers sing true of how the colors--dawn, sing blue... and oh, I wish my heart would sleep, to still the tears of beatings' weep... and if I could do all again-- I still would choose to call you friend. and if I could... and if I could-- surely, you would know my friend. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Wow serinty you words are so very powerful. I felt the blow of them, great Job BirbeeB |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very beautifully written seren, Feel like it came from the heart. Thanks Rich |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Serenity This my friend is just sooo soothing and oh sooo beautiful....lovely piece  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Serenity This my friend is just sooo soothing and oh sooo beautiful....lovely piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity, I really and truly love this. Utterly beautiful, an excellant write, really good. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*.....you have penned a wonderful piece here....love it. Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I call you ALL---friends. Thank you much. I love you all. Hugs. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweet, sweet Serentiy~ Oh, my ! How lovingly this is done. And I - I call you friend ! Love you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely, lyrical flow Serenity ... beautiful words from your heart, much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en...I'm adding this one to my favorite Serenity songs...this is beautiful girl! So soft and tender...the wings of angels couldn't be softer than this my friend...you have such a beautiful heart...and share it so lovingly...to call you a friend is an honor that shall never loose it's glow~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let me kiss you once goodbye... Let me breathe you into sighs... If only love would be my friend... I'd whisper once whisper again... ================== baby is singing the blues again and what a pretty lil ditty this is love the emotions of this one and know them well ..yeah.you know... perfect poetry me sweet *kisskiss* me |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
simply beautiful. enjoyed |
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