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serenity blaze
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0 posted 11-01-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Let me kiss you
  once
goodbye...
Let me breathe you
  into
sighs...

If only
love
would be
my friend...
I'd whisper
once
whisper
again...

and oh
how travelers
sing true
of how
the colors--dawn,
sing blue...
and oh,
I wish my
heart would sleep,
to still the tears
of beatings' weep...

and if I could
do all again--
I still would choose
to call you friend.

and if I could...
and if I could--
surely, you would know
my friend.


[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
BirdeeB
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1 posted 11-01-2000 02:01 AM       View Profile for BirdeeB   Email BirdeeB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BirdeeB

Wow serinty you words are so very powerful.
I felt the blow of them, great Job
BirbeeB
spiked
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2 posted 11-01-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Very beautifully written seren, Feel like it came from the heart.
Thanks
Rich
tracie66
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3 posted 11-01-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Serenity
This my friend is just sooo soothing and oh sooo beautiful....lovely piece  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


tracie66
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4 posted 11-01-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Serenity
This my friend is just sooo soothing and oh sooo beautiful....lovely piece  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Marsha
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5 posted 11-01-2000 04:10 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Serenity, I really and truly love this. Utterly beautiful, an excellant write, really good.
Take care
                Marsha  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
Charisma
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6 posted 11-01-2000 04:14 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

*wow*.....you have penned a wonderful piece here....love it.

Charisma
serenity blaze
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7 posted 11-01-2000 04:33 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I call you ALL---friends.

Thank you much.  I love you all.  Hugs.
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 11-01-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sweet, sweet Serentiy~
Oh, my !
How lovingly this is done.
And I -
I call you friend !
Love you !
~*Marge*~



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Kit McCallum
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9 posted 11-01-2000 06:56 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

What a lovely, lyrical flow Serenity ... beautiful words from your heart, much enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 11-01-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

S'en...I'm adding this one to my favorite
Serenity songs...this is beautiful girl! So
soft and tender...the wings of angels
couldn't be softer than this my friend...you
have such a beautiful heart...and share it
so lovingly...to call you a friend is an
honor that shall never loose it's glow~
Janet Marie
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11 posted 11-01-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Let me kiss you
  once
goodbye...
Let me breathe you
  into
sighs...

If only
love
would be
my friend...
I'd whisper
once
whisper
again...
==================
baby is singing the blues again
and what a pretty lil ditty this is
love the emotions of this one and know them well ..yeah.you know...
perfect poetry me sweet
*kisskiss*
me
Drauntz
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12 posted 06-02-2007 02:13 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

simply beautiful.


enjoyed
 
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