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The Mad Composer Dude |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I play the opus that I wrote My hands speed o’er the fancy font Striking, madly, each subtle note In my rickety rocking chair I show a mad composers face My audience then quickly hushes I put my toddlers in their place I find myself borrowing the beat To the background Barney blather Later, inches from the tele I idolize young Jerry Mathers ‘K fine I meant Jerry Springer I’m sure in a benevolent mood Sometimes that distortion thingy Reveals something in the nude How did I get off the subject? I’m a fine opus creator Bill the Cat shred all my poems The good ones- wow such a tater [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I'm sure it sounds just awful. Nice reading though  Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
How odd--(not the poem though it is as well) but when I made my reply it did not bump this up--- it stayed on page 2---????? trying again Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx jamie i have been seeing this problem for the last couple weeks i reply to a poem and it goes nowhere. hmmmmmmmmm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey Walt...I'll trade places with you...these teens are driving me crazy LOL...think I'd rather have Barney than gangsta rap...great write |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh my kid likes stuff i like cuz i force it down his throat yuh the lil girl too and the baby loves everything yuh |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Awesome, Walt! The ending kinda threw me, but it was still good! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
*grin* Me likes mucho, Walto....Doonesbury and it's Outlandish spawn. How well could I see the penguin in his tux as Bill runs for president again (wish he would've won 8 years ago) while younguns with curiously shaped nasal appendages idolize a purple molester and a molester exposer, that Purple-Peeple-Pinchin Critter. The mad hatted decomposing composer rocking idly wildly to the 'i hate everyone' anthem creating moribund scenarios for the tiny tater tots who love blood much more than purple, especially if it's shed by the deserving, or those deserving of having shed blood, or both...you never know with some kids...as the familiar familial ideals are skewed on-stage, on-air, where Leave it to Beaver is censored due to adult content and the chillins just stare and stare, eyes superglued to the screen like a worker to a beam, legs waggling like upset tortoise flailing to gain purchase in this hurly-burly world suspended 10-stories up and creating more to wile the day away..... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thnax tempty um ali we need to write together once just for the memories what else can i say nothing like you missed it totally that would be upsetting but yuh yuh yuh hows that |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Walt, I'm gettin scared...I'm really beginning to understand you! hey, love it...YUH Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
for the guy that was almost RFK thanky kkk? |
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