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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-10-31 07:05 PM

It's Just A Shoe

It's just a shoe I saw
on the living room floor,
black sequined,
high heeled,
laying on it's side
where she'd kicked it off
as she stumbled in the door.
We'd danced and played
late into the night
and finally came home,
slightly high,
giggling, shssshing,
as we tried not
to wake the kids,
and giggling again,
as that sparkling shoe
bounced off the lamp
to land in the middle of the room.
She's sleeping now,
this wife of mine,
though mornings come
and the sun is kissing her cheek.
I sip my coffee
and smile in thought…
It's just a shoe,
I think again,
but how I love that woman,
who puts it on her feet.

w.james beard, jr.

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

1 posted 2000-10-31 07:34 PM

JWesley, Oh this is precious. Just a shoe, but what a love! Thank you, I like this very much. (loved the "shssshing")

Rainydays

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-10-31 07:44 PM

HEY YOU!!!!!!!
where you been?????
and this is WONDERFUL....
what a sweet and endearing poem ...
such a tender peek into your heart..
lucky lady she is ...

nice to see you posting.
take care
jm

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2000-10-31 08:21 PM

Thanks,Rainydays, the "shssshing" just seemed to fit.

And JM - thanks much...missed you too. Been
sidetracked by other things...writing seemed
to be last in line...was hoping I still could and you know me...romance seemed to be the place to start again...

jwesley

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

4 posted 2000-10-31 09:43 PM

Romance is always the best place to
start...I loved the idea in this....how one
small object can bring back so many
thoughts...what a GREAT write this is!!!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-10-31 10:31 PM

JWesley~
Oh ... Cinderella's come home !

What a romantic notion you've shared with us.
I just darned well like it ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2000-11-01 09:21 AM

JWesley~ So good to see your name again!! This is SO romantic......what a sweet man.....*SIGH*.......loved this.

-SEA

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2000-11-01 10:09 AM

This was just a delight in every way...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2000-11-01 11:01 AM

"SIGH"

this is so romantic...and I think that you are one hell of a romanticus...your wife is lucky with you....you have given a great imagery of your story....the shoe...
Im glad that I came in, to find this one.
"SUPERB"

Charisma

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2000-11-01 10:29 PM

Thank you all for your warm and gracious thoughts. Been reading a lot the last day or so...nice to be back in here.

jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-02-2000).]

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