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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~NAKED SOUL SENRYU~ 5-7-5 Emotions stripped bare leaving soul vulnerable to be raped of heart *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ this is terribly sad........you ok?-SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, this is very intense, and I hope not something from a personal time. It is raw emotion here, every word. Take care. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Intense it is. Feel better. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, this is very powerful. . . Take care my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for your replies. Don't worry Sea everything is okay, I wrote this senryu during a dark period, but I am fine now  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Melissa, this is very powerful and emotional. I think that everyone has felt this way at one time or another. Glad you are feeling better. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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