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SEA
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0 posted 2000-10-31 12:39 PM


All I will ask
is this.......
each day please give me
just one little kiss

If you wish to give more
~your love~
I will not ignore

This is all I need
because my heart
has no greed

All I will ask
is this.......
just
one
little
kiss

-SEA-


*this is an old one, not a repost, but I like it  


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-31-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-10-31 12:48 PM


I like it too. Sweet.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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2 posted 2000-10-31 12:48 PM


SEA, so do I love so do I, in fact loud applause and bright smiles, this is lovely. Simply truly lovely.  
Take care
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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3 posted 2000-10-31 12:49 PM




                     

my    

and a big

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Elizabeth~ thank you

Mushy~ you are such a doll!  

Mark~ the smiles you give me come straight from my heart and work up to my lips!   Smooches!!

-SEA

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5 posted 2000-10-31 02:17 PM


Great poem...but "you must remember this..a kiss is still a kiss, a sigh is just a sigh....."  -i used the whole thing on a reply to anikay the other day...  



Jamie

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6 posted 2000-10-31 02:32 PM


SEA, yes, I like it too, and I LOVE kisses! A sweet verse!

Rainydays

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7 posted 2000-10-31 02:36 PM


SEA~
Me likes it !
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 2000-10-31 03:19 PM


A kiss is never just a kiss ..
and his kiss is what I miss.
his lips ... they are bliss
lip are just lips except for his like this
they make me howl and hiss ...
never to dismiss ...
just lay it on me ... that wet smoochy kiss  
*kisskiss LOL
love this one Sea-gator ...
so will your hubby me thinks  
better break out the chapstick  LOL
later-pucker-up-gator
jm

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Jamie~ I love it, thank you  

Rainydays~ I love 'em too, thanks  

Marge~   thank you

Janet~ LOVE IT Girlie girl....yea, I make my husband sore  

-SEA

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10 posted 2000-10-31 03:23 PM


a nice gentle poem, with a lovely message. Well, Mark has me beat with his graphics...but a lovely poem indeed. (hey Mark, You are a charmer!)

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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11 posted 2000-10-31 03:25 PM


Thank you RonK.....I am feelin free with my kisses today.....so .....SMOOCH!   -SEA
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12 posted 2000-10-31 03:29 PM



Sea~

This is so precious, I luvit too  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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13 posted 2000-10-31 03:31 PM


OOPPS! I made a Boo Boo ( on Halloween I guess that's pretty good 'eh?)

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SEA
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14 posted 2000-10-31 03:31 PM


Melissa~ Kisses for you too!!   thank you -SEA
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15 posted 2000-10-31 04:46 PM


Very good SEA...enjoyed the read. But instead of one...would you settle for three..
Wonderful sweet poem

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16 posted 2000-10-31 05:18 PM


I love it too.....even if its an old one...it is for me new, and I'm glad that you post it again...so we new members can enjoyed it too.

((hugs)))

Charisma

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17 posted 2000-10-31 05:33 PM


Sea I agree with your thoughts...except...I want one big kiss...and I wouldn't mind if it lasted about an hour..and more will definately not be ignored...James
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18 posted 2000-10-31 05:50 PM


Love it SEA, just one to start will do  laughs

Pepper
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19 posted 2000-10-31 06:45 PM


Sea this is so fun. Loved every line of it girl.
Juls

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20 posted 2000-10-31 07:55 PM


SEA - magnificent....smootch....smootch.....
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21 posted 2000-10-31 07:57 PM


Age does nothing but add a glow...loved it
my friend...


jwesley

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22 posted 2000-10-31 08:00 PM


Well, SEA, I don't think I'll give you any smooches, LOL, but I really liked this one, too!!  

sp  


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23 posted 2000-11-01 07:00 AM


SEA,
a kissable poem. I liked it.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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24 posted 2000-11-01 07:49 AM


Sea a kiss is worth a thousand words. You've written a lovely verse.
Rich

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Wow...I'm suprised you guys liked this one......it's just a little one I had tucked away.  

Alan~ smooch, smooch, smooch!!!  

Charisma~ thank you sweetie!  

James~ an hour long kiss..........yep, I can do that!! Smooches  

P35~ to start eh? OK  

Juls~ glad you liked this, thank you  

Bill~ Smooches back to you!  

JWesley~ Very happy to see you!!   and thank you, I'll remember that on my birthday......

Snowpants~ how about a hug then?  

Kethry~ thank you  

Rich~ Smooch!   thank you  

-SEA

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26 posted 2000-11-01 11:12 AM


The flower of the kiss...TULIPS...great write
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Cute Paula, I liked that, Tulips are pretty flowers.... -SEA
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28 posted 2000-11-01 05:25 PM


You can't get much more straight forward and loving than that....beautiful show of affection and loyal love....I hope you have to get retreads on your lips......take care ...ethome.
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