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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-10-31 06:37 AM


Spellbinding

It was the whispers of thy touch,
Of lips that pressed to mine.
Words that flowed and kissed this heart,
Binding me to thine.

It was the touching, gentle eyes,
Seeking, arresting mine.
Mesmerizing windows, pooled,
Reflecting loving times.

It was the softness, words of voice,
Raising love in mine.
I kiss the whispers from thy lips
Spellbinding me to thine.


~Wynter

© Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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1 posted 2000-10-31 06:39 AM


Nakd Thoughts,
it was spellbinding!
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2000-10-31 08:22 AM


Kethry-
thank you  

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-10-31 09:24 AM


I truly enjoy artful writes such as this...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



SEA
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with you
4 posted 2000-10-31 09:26 AM


***SIGH*** this is so romantic........ -SEA
Victoria
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5 posted 2000-10-31 09:29 AM


yes..very romantic and lovely..

           ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


vandana
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6 posted 2000-10-31 11:25 AM


Very nice!!!!!
Ron K. Fox
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7 posted 2000-10-31 11:47 AM


Beautiful.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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8 posted 2000-10-31 10:49 PM


Sunshine- I love your response, thank you  

Sea- sometimes I am a bit  too mushy, but it is only how I am thinking and feeling at that moment.

Victoria- thank you sweet Victoria

vandana- Nice to have you take a peek.

Ron- I think I have a fan in you   Thank you for always  visiting me. It makes me look forward to your visits.

~Wynter Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


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