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startin_fresh
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0 posted 2000-10-31 12:24 PM


Sitting alone in the dark
Morning creeping in at dawn
I feel alone and lonely
Then I think of you and smile
You come to me and hold me tight
I forget why i felt lonely at all
You are cherished my love
From one minute to the next
You have me in your power
I want only to make you smile.
Listen to my whispering sounds
As I speak the words I love you
No need to turn around dear
I am not any where near you
I am in your heart and mind
You think of the time we share
When two star crossed lovers met
That time we touched,kissed and loved
The dream of the world we need
Fear not my sweet Northern flower
I will warm you from the cold
Wrap you in my arms so tight
And in each others arms we sleep.
But then we awaken at dawn
When morning has crept in
We hesitate to look around
then we feel each other near
For the day has come my love
That there is no more wishing
That we could be together soon
Because I am right beside you
Making love to you as birds sing
The days seem so much brighter
Since you first came into my life
Staying near my heart to protect me.
You deserve so much my love
I hope you never regret our meeting
I will treat you as special as I can
And that my sweet is what love means.




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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-10-31 12:45 PM


This is quite lovely...you've a natural lilt for sonnets, methinks.  Sensitive and sincere.  
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2 posted 2000-10-31 04:48 AM


*sigh*...love can be so wonderful...you've penned this with a loth of warmth and love in it...she's been lucky to have you on her side.
well done.

Charisma

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