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The Jackal
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0 posted 2000-10-31 12:05 PM


you say all you need to say
you say all you ne e d to say

and i drift ...i drift
because i know of no other way

lets look alive people..lets try to look alive

because some day,you will have your right place with your right time and your right waste
a right piece of mind to f ill up this space

in your right home -with no one home- and its empty-and your empty-
and your cut is your core
your need to bleed is always more

never sure what the fighting is for

never sure of your name or the weather

where you came from or where your going

ask again of c o n n e c t i o n..
as k me to start connecting

and i'll drift/i' ll always drift

because its the only -sane- way to explain this---.



no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-31 09:32 AM


this felt so sad........-SEA
Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-10-31 10:53 AM


An emotional piece. very very good

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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