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Beautiful Dreamer |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Beautiful dreamer Dancing in the clouds Traipsing over rainbows Far above the crowds Beautiful dreamer Take me by the hand Show me how it’s done now In that magic land Beautiful dreamer Nothing gets you down Soaring high forever Never known a frown Beautiful dreamer Dancing on moonbeams Nothing can defeat you Safe within your dreams Beautiful dreamer Twirling up above Constellations call you Whisper words of love Beautiful dreamer Beautiful dreamer Let me share your dreams |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Denise~ this floats and sways so softly...Enjoyed....  -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Denise- this is just beautiful. such a soft and comforting read. love it lots. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Ahwww! I'm floating! What power in words. Wonderful job and my treat to read. Marcy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nicely done, Denise  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ What happy thoughts ! 'Beautiful dreamer Twirling up above Constellations call you Whisper words of love' Oh, I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fantastic poetry... such a joy to read your poems.... Denise, My regards, Sudhir |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is so dreamy....I loved it!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Denise, how did you get that gorgeous child to write such dreamy poetry?  Excellent.Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Beautiful dreamer Dancing in the clouds Traipsing over rainbows Far above the crowds -------------------------------- Denise - This is so lovely. I love the idea of dancing in the clouds and traipsing over rainbows. What a dream! |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
I can only agree with everyone else. This is magical and oh so dreamy. Tessa |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Beautiful dreamer Twirling up above Constellations call you Whisper words of love Denise, absolutely lovely! Stars, whispers, love...soulful treasures. Robert Joseph |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Almost like a song. Lovely work! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a beautifu dream you weave. loved it Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful dreamer Nothing gets you down Soaring high forever Never known a frown Oh how I would love to feel this and have a "forever" smile...I think I am inspired once again by your words on here ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Sea, Vicky, Marcy, Balladeer, Marge, Sudhir, Beth, Kethry, Poet's Sister, Tessa, Robert, Elizabeth, Ron and Wynter's Bliss for reading and for your lovely replies! This was a song that was floating around in my head last night (sounds better to the music....hehehe....too bad I can't write the music that I heard in my head, too!) Thanks again, everyone, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks, Marge, for lending me Popie! I'll send her home shortly....in a little while...I promise Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Me says this is very very pretty...Loved it Denise!!!!  Happy Halloween!!!! Take Care, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Bridgette! I'm glad you liked it! Nice to see you here again! Denise |
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