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Once I Loved a Man
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Once I Loved a Man |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Once I Loved a Man Once I loved a man. There now is nothing That life can show me, That I haven't already seen, For I have lived, and died, And yet I live, for Once I loved a man. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PS~ BEAUTIFUL!!  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetsSister~ How simplistic in thought ... how deep it lays in the heart. I like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poet's Sister, The title got me right of the bat, and I was not disapoited on reading this little Gem, you have said so much, VERY MUCH loved it thank you for sharing and welcome to passions. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
PS, Wonderful poem. At elast you have known love in your lifetime. I bet you'll find it again. Welcome to Passions.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've said quite a bit with so few words! Very nice! Denise |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Sea - Thank you. Marge - Your comments are always so thoughtful. Thank you. Cerinity - I'm glad you were not disappointed. Lone Wolf - Yes, I have found it again. It's funny though how past loves are never completely in the past. Denise - Thanks. I hope I made my point with these few words. Thanks for reading. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so simply beautiful, and so very true. Loved it. Sandra |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This reminds me so much of the opening of one of my favorite books "The Notebook" by Nicholas Sparks. He brings about the same point only in a much lengthy way. You've said a great deal in just 7 lines and I especially like the way you've repeated the first line only with a new meaning in the last line. As you know, I happen to be real fond of repeatition in poetry to bring added emphasis. Nicely done...me thinks perhaps I should be called the "Poet's Sister" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a very cool poem perfect in its brevity and its presentation... this is definaltly a case of where less is more... you poetically summed it all up with these few well chosen and spoken words well done take care jm |
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