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Kitty**
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0 posted 2000-10-30 06:54 PM



You touched..
I felt..
you left..
I wept..


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2000 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-30 06:58 PM


Kitty~ I understand this........ -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-30 06:58 PM


Short...sweet...lovely.



Alan
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3 posted 2000-10-30 07:07 PM


Very short. But it says a lot.
Kitty**
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4 posted 2000-10-30 07:13 PM


Sea, Poet's Sister, And Alan
Thank you for the kind words..You all are such great poets that I am thrilled when
you like some of my stuff.

Kitty

Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-10-30 07:16 PM


In a few words you described and I felt a mountain of emotions.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Kitty**
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6 posted 2000-10-30 10:05 PM


Ron,
That was my exact intention! ;-)
It was a release of a mountain of emotions for me..

BTW...Love your writings!! I like the way
you can relate to so many different
scenarios..

Kitty

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7 posted 2000-10-30 10:21 PM


You said it, short and exactly.
Me too...
Sandra

Kitty**
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8 posted 2000-10-30 10:27 PM


Sandra,
I am sorry it has been that way for you too!
(((HUGS)))

Kitty

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9 posted 2000-10-31 12:29 PM


Kitty~
Oh ... this says volumes !
Might not take up much space on a bookshelf -
but it sure does in a heart.

Lovely.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth
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10 posted 2000-10-31 12:31 PM


Sure says a lot...

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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