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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-10-30 03:49 PM


Sealed With A Kiss

My Love
when you feel better
perhaps we will spend
more time together.
So while you are
resting your body
take some time
to refresh your soul.
And remember I care for you
and I hope you understand
how my heart yearns so much
for your soft gentle touch.
So for now I will seal
this letter with a kiss
and when you are better
may I once again
share the pleasure
of your most tender lips.

Jameslee@October30,2000
RestMinaMyLove



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-30 04:10 PM


James~You know you melt my heart.......this is so tender......love this..... -SEA
Dee
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2 posted 2000-10-30 04:18 PM


James, this lady is very lucky to have some one who expresses their feelings in the beautiful way you do.
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Charisma
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3 posted 2000-10-30 06:33 PM


you touch my heart with your words,penned with a lot of love .....excellent write.

((hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2000-10-30 06:35 PM


whispered softly where only hearts listen. . .

wonderful James. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-10-30 09:02 PM


Sigh ... simply lovely James, very tender ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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James~ *SIGH* just wanted to read again   -SEA
Alle'cram
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7 posted 2000-10-30 11:10 PM


~~Awwwwh~~just beautiful, this should do it, make her feel better that is..   Marcy
Paula Finn
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8 posted 2000-10-31 12:12 PM


James...you always say the most beautiful things
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2000-10-31 05:19 AM


Tenderness in written words, poetry in a heart that feels...

James, my friend, this is beautiful...

regards,
Sudhir

Rosebud1229
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10 posted 2000-11-01 12:17 PM


beautiful!!
Marina
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11 posted 2000-11-01 08:41 PM


Wonderful James!  I see you are indeed learning to be patient with Mina.  I am sure she respects and loves you all the more for it.  

Marina


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peppermint35
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12 posted 2000-11-01 08:46 PM


What a lovely way to send your love some get well medicine!!!  She should be feeling all kinds of better after this!!!!

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-11-05 02:07 PM


I sincerely thank you all for your interesting and beautiful responses...James
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2000-11-05 02:17 PM


I'm trying this again since it didn't move off of page 11 the last time I posted...James
Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2000-11-05 02:25 PM


James,

What lovely thoughts my friend.  I hope that Mina is feeling better.  I am sure she appreciates these peeks into your dear heart.  Beautifully written.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

jwesley
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16 posted 2000-11-05 02:34 PM


Ah, the way the heart has of singing a song...beautifully done, my friend.


jwesley

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2000-11-08 04:22 PM


Thank you Lone Wolf and JWesley for the wonderful remarks...James
Jenn E
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18 posted 2000-11-08 04:26 PM


I love your heart, how it feels and how your mind works in unison to express all that it feels.  
Soft Smiles
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ThUnDeRkYsS
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19 posted 2000-11-08 09:30 PM


This is truely a wonderful expression of Love on your part, wonderfully written as well

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



poetic_imperfection
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20 posted 2000-11-08 09:32 PM


I man with words to the soul. Very impressive James. Now if only I could find a man with such words to say to me. I see your heart in this one.
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