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Just Me.....and You....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Delighted moans fall into the night from quivering lips at Passions height As our cresendo of lust reaches it's peak more wanting........more taking......... more touching we seek........... Groping desperately hot mouths do find skin pliant and waiting to connect yet again Names spoken on breathless sigh forever and endless together we fly Higher and higher swept away are we two nothing else in this world just me......and you....... -SEA- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just me and you and a dog named boo and a sensual romp...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, this is magic, pure magic, I really love this. Passion there is nothing to beat it. I better not let David see this one, Really great write. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ forget the dog baby!!  Mushy~ why can't David read this...too young? -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
whoa SEA...it's getting warm in here.. WARM: adjective: having or producing a comfortable and agreeable degree of heat or imparting or maintaining heat. That say's it all.(and I'm being cionservative) Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ thank you for reading, and I'm so glad you enjoyed  -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
SEA, you write so descriptively I blushed! Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, Is David too young?, No love just too David. Innocent, is probably the best desciption, and the kindest. One of lifes lonely souls, which is why he likes it in our office. All the women mother him and don't tease him. So I'll keep him away from this one, he's still blushing from the offer of a hug. The porters tease him unmercifully, but we think he's sweet. The rest of the office love this one, they really do. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
just perfect... I loved how this moved along the tongue while it was read, very passionate. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love can take you so high, wonderful feeling, wonderful penned. love it...great write. Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yep lady, you got me goin' with this one...hope you enjoyed it as much as I did... rofl....*wink* |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
I definitely want my hubby to read this one!!! So sensual.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee~ sorry to make you blush, but I'm glad you liked this Mushy~ that is just too cute, well you protect David's sweet innocent eyes good thing I didn't offer him a kiss..... I'm glad the others liked this, thank you Snow~ thank you!  Chairsma~ thank you for reading and liking Serenity~ yours was quite hot too, so I guess I'm glad I got you going Poet's Sister~ I e-mailed this to my hubby at work and he e-mailed me back some sweet words let me tell ya!! -SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I think this is special ! Just real, real special ! You just got a way about ya' ! I'm sure hubby enjoyed it muchly ... and he probably liked the poem too ! Love ya', gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ thank you so much........let's just say he made me some pretty promises -SEA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sorry,I brought this back up for Mark to read before he bails on us for a week.... |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
SEA, purely magical...you capture the essence of desire in your words. Thanks for sharing with us. Robert Joseph |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh my GAWDDDDDDDD ******* you are going to send me on a trip for a week with the visions of us in this? You my dear friend shall have ME quivering in my boots desperately trying to make it back here to find you. HHHHmmmmm I think this calls for a bit of STRONG CONTROL on my part LOL...you can imagine my response to this can you not? If not then you will either have to email me or just use that wonderful imagination of yours LOL Don't want to be banned forever you know. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RJ~ what a wonderful reply thank you Mark~ So did you like this then? Ahhhhhh miss me Cowboy..........-SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
you already know m'sweet friend ... miss me too [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, SEA! Just lovely! Denise |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, beautiful....just beautiful. Well done. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
As hot as any flame and as sweet as the finest wine....the combination is pure magic~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Inspires desire with every stroke of the pen!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow SEA this is awesome. Loved every line of it. Juls |
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