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SEA 
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***I whispered*** ~please don't go~ I want you, I need you I love you so ***I begged*** ~stay with me~ you are my heart's desire my destiny ***I ached*** ~heart breaking in two~ without you my love whatever will I do? ***I cried*** ~good-bye~ ......and the rain fell gently...... from the darkened sky. -SEA- * just what I felt from the rainy sky this morning* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
....SEA.... It seems like the rain always falls when love walks away. I hope the sun peeks out to brighten the day for you!!  |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Sunny1~ thank you, but I LOVE the rain....it was just what it brought me this morning....and I liked it. Thank you for reading  -SEA |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i likes it whistful |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Go get a dog they are more dependable. I love the rain as you do. Sometimes it makes me cry for joy other times it brings up sad memories. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, I love the rain usually, like when it falls gently on the thirsty earth, or when there's a spectacular thunderstorm, that only last 15mins. I don't like the rain as it is at the moment, hurling itself against the windows, like a Kami Kazi pilot. With all the force of gale winds. Lets hope this storm will go away soon. That apart love this is a fabulous poem, really soul breaking, my what a gift you have. Take care Mushy  < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ thank you for looking in here...... Inot2B~ I have a dog and she is the best.....the rain is very inspiring to me....thanks  Marsha~ I'll take take rain any way I can get it......thank you Mushy  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Sea...your sad...sigh...makes me sad too. At least the rain will cheer you, just dance among the drops, feel their cool tickles run down your face, I can see you smiling already. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"......and the rain fell gently...... from the darkened sky" ~~ love this! thank you! Rainydays |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sea-Very touching sad and sweet, I hope its only the rain, but if it loss of a love then I send hugs to you my friend. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Rainydays~I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Gemini~ I'm not going through this,it just came from the rain, but thank you for the hugs! -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...ya gotta know I love this...touches deep...thanks |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ thank you for stopping in to read I'm glad this touched you sweet friend -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Sounds like the PERFECT day to go puddle-jumping to me ! Like you ... I love what the rain delivers. Nice one, kiddo ! I was tempted to say 'You're all wet !' Tee-Hee ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- i love this. isn't rain a wonderful thing... and often so inspiring. LOL @ Marge...think i'll join her for some of that puddle-jumping too. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Marge~ I love to splash in puddles, I am such a kid when the rain is here......I'm never as happy as I am when it rains.......it stirs emotions powerful in me...Thank you, I am so happy you liked this one! -SEA |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Vicky~ You snuck in there, ahh yep, that puddle splashin is fun. Thank you -SEA |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow.... what a breathless piece, made my heart ache. Bravo< !signature--> "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Sea I love a nice rainy day snuggled in bed hearing the rain beat on the window. You sent many images my way, Thank You Rich |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Saxoness~ thank you, I'm so glad you liked this..... Spiked~ I think that sounds like a wonderful way to spend a rainy day. -SEA |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
SEA, straight from the heart, your pen gives us ''rainy-day passion'' Robert Joseph |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ahhh my sweet friend. Shed those shoes and socks and come romp in the rain with me. Splash til your heart is content in every puddle and then come let me pick you up and carry you under the shower of water flowing from the eaves of the roof and kiss you dry.(can you tell, that I don't want you to get dry too soon???? ) |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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RJ~ thank you so much Mark~ OK....... I'm always game to play in the rain.....then to slowly dry off........ - SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Did I ever tell you how sweet it is to kiss the raindrops from your eyelids as they form right at the tip of your lashes? |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ I like.......I like....... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
-My sweet, you better miss me this week while I am gone. I am moving but I promise to come and kiss those drops of pure honey from you anytime. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I wait for you every day......I will miss you this week.....hurry back! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I will baby, and the first place I will land is in your soft arms with a hug to beat all hugs. You will be picked up and spun around and see the desire in my eyes my sweet friend. You gotta know that by now....sure you do lol...hugs and kisses baby... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
could you be any sweeter?! I hope the move goes well for you.....hurry up...I miss you already -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
me too my friend .... me too!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I loved every word it's says. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
SEA!!!! Wonderful!!! Rain is such an inspiring thing; makes one stay in bed; not such a bad idea  laughs Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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