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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-10-30 07:26 AM



The Cherish Of This Moment
~*Marge Tindal*~

When memories tiptoe across the meadow
and touch a sigh of remembrance
in the heart of not-soon-forgotten
You will come and play your song
and I will sing with joyous voice
of knowing you wrote it just for me
You will see the glisten of a tear upon my cheek
and brush it away with the sunshine of your smile
And I will wrap the cherish of this moment
in pink ribboned remembering of you forevermore


*Written for Martie and Rainbow Girl
in loving rememberances of Michelle and Rachel*


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2000-10-30 07:36 AM


Marge, this is beautiful, I really love this one. I'll keep this tucked up in my heart, it's a real treasure.
Utterly brilliant Marge
Take care
               Marsha
                        

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-10-30 07:40 AM


Marge* I know that they will both appreciate
your words of comfort in this difficult time
for both of them...such a beautiful display
of love and friendship from you...you have a
shining heart of gold and weave it so
delicately into your poetry~
~hugs~ to you dear lady~

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3 posted 2000-10-30 07:47 AM


Oh Marge, How sweet this is!  What beautiful words you have penned for Martie and RG... Thoughts many here will treasure.  Bonnie
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4 posted 2000-10-30 08:03 AM


oh my, Marge, this was gorgeous in thought and words.....I want to wrap myself in the warmth of your words today...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


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Marge~ just when I think your heart couldn't possibly get any bigger.............this is touching and so very sweet.....loved this.   -SEA
Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-10-30 09:52 AM


My friend, you truely have a golden heart, did you know that?  Well of course you did.  I know that both of them will love you for this and they can't help but love the beautiful poem you left for them.  Hugs to you my sweet Cherokee.  
Robert Joseph
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7 posted 2000-10-30 10:04 AM



Lovely work, Marge. I'm sure your words will find a home in the heart of those intended, as well as those who take the time to read this endearing piece.

Robert Joseph

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8 posted 2000-10-30 10:27 AM


OH, such a sweet, loving and touching poem, delivered with a tear and remembrance..lovely and they will cherish it, I am sure..   Marcy
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9 posted 2000-10-30 03:39 PM


Marsha~
Thank you.  
Just keep them both in your prayers.

ButterfliesDC~
This one is just talks straight from my heart.  Thanks.

Bonnie~
I am pleased to have the words of loving comfort for them both.

Wynter~
Thank you so much for your sweet comments.

SEA~
You know I love you and I thank you.

MarkB~
Your hugs are so special, my friend.

RJ~
I appreciate your thoughts.

Marcy~
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2000-10-30 06:37 PM


Absolutely beautiful. . .

Wonderful Marge. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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11 posted 2000-10-30 06:38 PM


Marge, this is just lovely, all of it!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


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12 posted 2000-10-30 07:34 PM


Sven~
Thank you, friend.

IrishRose~
I'm pleased that you liked it.
Thank you for letting me know.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-10-30 08:01 PM


Hi Marge,

This is so beautiful, and so very loving of you to write this for them, you are a wonderful person.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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14 posted 2000-10-30 08:07 PM


Marge, the tenderest of tender, your words, and I thank you for sharing them here.

Your fan,
Rainy

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15 posted 2000-10-30 08:18 PM


Marge~~~~~~MWAH~~~~~~one big  smack for you....for your golden heart....
you have pennend a wonderful piece.
((hug))
Charisma

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16 posted 2000-10-30 09:39 PM


Very beautifully done, Marge and so touching!

Denise

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17 posted 2000-10-31 12:03 PM


Cerenity~
Thank you.  Just a hug from my heart for them both.

RainyDays~
Thank you so much.

Charisma~
Awww !  Thanks.

Denise~
For two wonderful women who
have touched our hearts with their love.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sudhir Iyer
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18 posted 2000-10-31 05:22 AM


This is so much you, Marge... marvellous... wonderful.... and the adjectives will just keep on flowing...

Such a pleasure reading your poetry, my friend...

Regards,
Sudhir


Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2000-11-01 12:25 PM


Sudhir~
My friend, my friend.
So nice to see you.
Glad you had a chance to see this one.
It's a special thought for two special ladies.
Thank you for the sweet reply.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2000-11-01 04:05 AM


Marge
This is so very warm and touching ~god bless you~ sweet one
sending my winged ~HUGS~ their way and your's
Luv ya sweetheart
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2000-11-01 07:20 PM


Tracie~
Thanks, hon.
We all thank you for the hugs.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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22 posted 2000-11-05 08:49 PM


Bless you

HUSG

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