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A CHALLENGE FOR ALL OF YOU (A Repost...Good Luck)
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A CHALLENGE FOR ALL OF YOU (A Repost...Good Luck) |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470
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After much consideration, I have decided to re-post this. There is a long story behind the reason it was taken down. I can PROMISE you that one day you will all hear it... Or depending on how perceptive you are, you will figure it out on your own. (p.s hope you like my halloween costume..lol) I am blowing the whistle, “WE” are now exposed… When they all see this They will all know. The bird has flown the coup “WE” have been revealed… Our secret is no longer safe I’m gonna tell them how I feel There is this guy YOU ALL know... I’d say you know him well I could easily say his name But that part I won't tell. He and I have this thing… and Well, it’s kind of hard to explain It’s like an unseen force I think he feels the same… He is sweet and he’s caring I’m sure you would all agree I know you all think he’s adorable…. You tell him CONSTANTLY! Can you guess who he is? I dare you all to try... He may not reveal himself Too many “forum” girls may cry…. …p.s….you know who you are ..lol…so only respond if you are going to reveal yourself… We’ll all be waiting…… "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I won't even guess since I haven't been around long enough to see it all or rather read it all. but judging by the poems I've read by you,sweet, truthful and passion filled, he's a lucky guy. You little devil. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can't guess either but I am sitting on the edge of my chair waiting for his response to reveal himself..if he dares....*S ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I give up too!!! I'm easy, though  laughs Love the costume!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lady Lost I'M GUESSING.... you'll have lots of people claiming to be "the one"  Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
They always say to say the first thing that comes to mind..and JAMES came to my mind, but it could be just about anyone here..now that i think about it haa... A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Adorable? It's gotta be Balladeer!!! |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Is that your final answer? I'm sorry, no one is correct! Keep guessing... and keep your eyes open for "clues" |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OK OK FINE!! I'll bite.........Parker? -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LL, if this is really only a guessing game then everthing is fine, and I'd certainly don't wish to be a killjoy here. No one likes fun games as much as I do, but if it's not then I offer you this < !signature-->The Gossip A Cautionary Tale There once was a woman, I'll just call her Mable She would gossip whenever and wherever she was able The tales she would spread, Oh! The tales she told Ohwhy? She cries. Why am I now out in the cold? She was thoughtless, that's the best thing I can say Mable poor old Mable, Oh how she now has to pay The fault with her, I really think you will agree Is in not thinking before she spoke. Don't you agree? Without a thought she just passed the gossip on She believed that to gossip well, no harm's done To pass on the tale might not seem all that bad But I wonder don't you really think, my how sad? Every word whether thoughtless, meant or not Whatever it is, particually when the gossip is 'hot' Causes someone to think maybe this might be true But how would you feel if it happened to one of you? Wouidn't you feel rather hurt, angry and betrayed Prefer to leave, even while wishing you had stayed Mable got her just deserts for certain you know Words, the lies, it's not that easy to stop the flow Poor Mable she's lost all her own friends it's true They didn't want her to pass their own tales on to you She's discovered that gossip causes a lot of pain Finally Mable said that she won't ever gossip again Marsha (Now I wonder if anyone believes her?) Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Poor Mable. That is a very well written poem. Some people take things too seriously sometimes, though. I appreciate the warning...but this is something going on in my life, and I am choosing to share it .. as a guessing game. I don't see that as gossip, I see it as fun. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LL in that case, have fun, and enjoy. I wasn't really I wasn't trying to preach. It's just that a similar situation happened to a very close friend of mine, and things definitely got out of hand. Take care Marsha  |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Jeffrey Carter!!! (I just saw his pic a few days ago - woohoo! He's cuuuuute!) C |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Nope. Nice try, though. Really. Nice try. Thank you for trying. lol |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You never said if it was Parker or not.......-SEA |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Nope. Not Parker. Who is Parker? Is he cute? lol. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Is he cute?! Duh! -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
NOOPE not even gonna step in this one... toooooo easy to get in trouble .. but its pretty obvious it could only be one of several...especially after who you've ruled out......and you have ruled out all the above mentioned..RIGHT??? does the word swoon mean anything????hehe and hon....if ya dont know who Parker is.. ya just dont know what your missing...LOL sweetest sonnets this side of the border and that cowboy hat aint half bad either OH BTW....Cool pic behind you...I have the same one... have fun poets... TRICK OR TREAT...LOL later-hide-in-seek-gators jm |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
soooo... no I don't know who parker is. Do I need to watch my back now? lol. I'm sure whoever he is he is wonderful. I have been hanging out in the Corner Pub since I started writing....a whole other gang. Good guesses though this has been fun. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Um. . . well. . . I have no idea. . . and I have a question. . . where's your costume??  ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I'm not guessing. But it is a mice poem. And I do like the cosume |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My guess: Ron Carnell!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
The bird has flown the coup.....mmmmm.... I only could think on Eagle one....maybe.... mmmm....thinking, ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Of course!!!! deVine. . . how could I have been so stupid!!!! *bangs hand on forehead* ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Since I'm new here, I have no idea! But, I used to have a costume like that, only with bigger horns. passion is life. . . |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Sven: Sarcasm or are you serious. Actually, I was born with those horns on my head. I really am a she-devil....lol Oh and Alan: Thank you Poet Devine: You are too much. lol. You are a lot like someone I know.... Oh and it's not Ron, BTW, not even close. But you already knew that didn't you.... heheCharisma: Bonus Points for you. You are still wrong, but that was an awesome guess Passions Voice: Bigger Horns? lol.< !signature--> "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lady Lost, Sarcasm all the way!!! LOL And I kind of figured that you always had those. . . just kept them out of your other pic!!! LOL ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, its not me.....damn damn. Oh, and thanks for the nice reply Janet baby. I guess I own you a big wet one... Well, Hi Lady Lost, or is it Beth... and can I say oh my gawd on the costume. Since you don't know me, and I don't have a little pic on here, see me in this like and say hi... oh...heck forget the mystery guy choose "Mr Right"... lol/pip/Forum37/HTML/000674.html Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
That's it! I'm going to sit in the corner with all the other dissapointed hopefuls....lol Love the horns! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
parker baby.......down boy!....stick with me love...and those wet kisses--hey!..over here... sorry lady lost...sometimes he wanders off...  hugs,dg "after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
what wandering around or off.... there is plenty of me to go around... yes thats the word PLENTY Parker.... Oh, and I forgot to say earlier...great poem Lady Lost. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
lady lost..please forgive my love puppy...tramping through your lovely poem... parker...keep your plenty in your pants love..  hugs, dg |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Parker: Thank you for your kind words...It seems as though you have many admirers! dgarvner: Down Girl! WHEW! lol Eagle One: No Guesses?? Parker: Thanks again.. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I'll accept that definition...."Love Puppy"..yeah a love puppy. Doesn't every girl want a love puppy. A cute little love puppy to follow you around. Always obeying any orders. Doesn't a devilish girl need a love puppy too.... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh, here's my guess.... It's our own self appointed defender of the faith... he hangs out in the alley.. Am I close. Parker |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
oops .... I replied twice.... ok i'll edit this...he also hangs out in Dark Passions. [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...all in fun lady lost hey love puppy...come on back to me when you get thru trampin around ...what a tease he is................ /pip/Forum42/HTML/000148.html ,dg |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Horns? She has horns? I hadn't noticed. If I get to get under the she-devil's skin I'll volounteer to be the one Nice uhmmm ........ horns |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
"Love Puppy" - ??!?!!?!!?!  HAHAHAHAHAHA *ahem* Is it Poet deVine??? Tell!!! Chris |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Parker, you mean that it wasn't you? Love Puppy!! LOL Now, that surprises me. . . thought I had a sure thing with you. . . Hmmmmmmmmm. . . "Self-appointed defender of the faith". . . *puts thinking cap on* *queue the Jeopardy music. . . * Hmmmmmmmmm. . . anybody got odds on who it might be? And if so, give me 10 dollars on the favorite!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
hmmmm. somebody may be getting, um warm. I'll give you a clue: He and I would make REALLY cute little "devils".... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Christopher........Sven........no wait....NOT Mark......ok.......hmmmmmmm.......Local Rebel......Jefferey........Sudhir lyer.......Bsquirrel......wait..little Spyro........am I close? It wasn't our Love Puppy, did you check out his photo? Cute huh! I'm giving up and I'm ready for you to tell us who the devilman is...... Common, give it up now......aren't you about ready to bust!?  -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
maybe he is also a moderator...? Well, am I warmer or way off... and no... i'm not finished tramping about. What do you get when combine a cute little devil with a cowboy? I don't know but it sure would be one HELL of a good ride...lol.... Who's your devil... Who's your devil.. lol someone stop meeee, please. I need a drink.. Bartender.... i'll have a two shooters please.. one little devil for me and a Halley's Comfort for her over there with the horns... and yes they are real drinks... I looked them up. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Does this mean it's not Christopher?...Dang thought for sure it was, ok I give...And I can't believe Parker has been cheating behind my back.....going to the corner to pout now. Oh BTW great poem and this is great fun. Juls |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I guess I have to spill the beans  The truth is, YES there is someone who I am growing closer to every day... a person who I care about a LOT. And yes, you all know him WELL. However, it would not be polite of me to state the obvious, I mean his name, without his permission. (he knows about all of this and he has been getting a kick out of it, I am sure) soooo... I ask all of you to help me PLEAD for him to reveal himself...he's reading this, I promise. The only way to find out the TRUE identity of this man, we'll call him Mr. X, is if he posts a response to my poem. If he chooses not too, its okay. I am sure it would be because he doesn't want anyone to know he likes the Devil...lol. All I , we, can do now is wait...... ....... .... .. . with eager anticipation. ....beth |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Beth, first I was pouting. Now I'm whinning...lol. I think we're all waiting now. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The innuendo is unmistakable: It's Philip!!! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
No Not Philip...is HE cute, too? lolHe's here. Reading. Laughing at me. Laughing really hard at me. Looking REALLY cute while he's laughing at me... Okay I need a drink, too, Parker. Bartender--throw a cosmipolitan my way please. Make it a double. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Um, can I say that for once. . . it's not me?? LOL And I have to bet that it's Christopher. . . who else would we describe in these terms?? Okay, so now the odds are: Christopher 5-2 Ron Carnell 3-1 Parker 10-1 Philip 12-1 Love Puppy 15-1 Balladeer 20-1 Jamie 30-1 Sven 99-1 Place your bets!!!! And now, I need a drink. . . bar keep!! Long Islands, and keep them coming!!! ---------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know who it is...........it's TOERAG!!!! yes/no?!?!? |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
All I can say is that one of you are right. Thats all I can say for now. SO congratulations to the person who was right....  (I have a feeling I am getting an a** kicking for saying that) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It was Toerag wasn't it?! |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I was going to try and narrow it down by the names LL didn't reply to. But it's kinda hard when SEA guesses 10 in one post!!!! Come on damnit, I'm dying with the......................................... ...................................................................  ................................................................. ................ ................................................................. ...................................................heh........anticipation....(Well, that's how you make it feel!!!!) Much love all, Krissie |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
SEA: so close but yet so FAR (hint hint) did I ever tell you guys that I live right outside of Philadelphia..... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm itching to get this solved so let me make more angry by guessing a bunch ok..................... Seymour..........hmmmmm I don't knw where he is from.......Danny Holloway.......???.......Walt? Is it our beloved Walt?..........It could be Spiked..his birthday is the same as mine ya know................Master..it could be him.....Alicat is a good choice too.....throw me a hint, which forum does he hang out in? -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Be a gentleman and post and say yes, yes it is me, I am the one. Or at least post and say no it is not me, I am not the one. Please don't keep this lady waiting forever, she is eagerly waiting...in the interest of Love...ha...James |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
I still say it's Christopher. Why is it that it's not being denied either?...Huh huh???...lol. Ok I need a drink too, make that a Miller Lite please, ummm in a chilled glass also. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
I forgot to bet. 100.00 on Christopher And gawd give me another Miller please. [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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