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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2000-10-29 11:00 PM



Dream tangos play
The music
With bolero-like insistence
Sensuous here
A torrid Latin beat
It’s in the hips
My hands lower slip
Upright and smooth
All liquid underneath
The ball of mirror pieces
Casting planetary lights
In the candlelight
Alone on a clouded floor
You’re not dressed for the public
But just for me
A long skirt of strips
Over thong
Indecent bikini top
Stiletto heels
Of shiny black
Catch the light
As does your eyes
As they catch mine
Lingering on smooth skinned thighs
Wake me from this dream
Wake me
We will dance
Our bedroom
Our ballroom
Until the world spins
Off its axis
Until we fall
Dizzy
Giddy with love
Back to the union
That brought us here



Things which matter most must never be at the mercy of things
which matter least.

~ Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe ~

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-10-29 11:03 PM


Woo-hoo!   Seriously though, Wilfred, that was a really loving poem.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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2 posted 2000-10-29 11:45 PM


Hi Bill--
"It takes two to tango, two to tango, two to really get the feeling of romance"

and as for Bollero...well...that takes two too, but I'm sure you know that!  Very nice dance...er poem!

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3 posted 2000-10-29 11:47 PM


Crazy...Sexy...Cool!


"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss

Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2000-10-30 09:12 AM


Elizabeth-
Combining dream fantasy and reality - is a stretch I like to make - I guess I merged them to your pleasure this time - Thank you

Martie-
The latin dances - are and have always been the most passionate - The Tango may not be my best dance - But I 'feel' it fully and know how much it communicates the strength of my love. Thank God it takes two  

Toodles-
I take it you liked?   Thanks LOL


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5 posted 2000-10-30 06:14 PM


We will dance
Our bedroom
Our ballroom
Until the world spins
Off its axis
Until we fall
Dizzy
Giddy with love
Back to the union
That brought us here
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What beautiful romantic lines you have penned.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-10-30 06:50 PM


WOW..what did ya eat before ya went to bed ..
SOMETHING SPICY!!
this poem makes me giddy...and giddy is good
excellent dream sequence Wil ...
ya cant go wrong with stilettos and thongs LOL  
thanks for the dance  
later-light-on-your-feet-gator
jm

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7 posted 2000-10-30 06:53 PM


*sigh*

The dance never ends my friend. . .

This was superb. . . why can't I have dreams like this???  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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8 posted 2000-10-30 10:07 PM


Is that Ravel's Bolero I hear? Ah yes, I do believe...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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9 posted 2000-10-30 10:24 PM


WY~ this is seductive and very sexy.......love it!!   -SEA
Wilfred Yeats
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10 posted 2000-10-31 02:46 PM


Janet Marie=
Thongs - even better edible ~WG~
thanks
Later giddy gater  

Sven -
Late night spicy food perhaps ?
Thanks  

Karilea-
Yep - a la "10"  ~WG~
thanks  

SEA-
You zeroed in on my intent  
Thanks


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