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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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i told you that i need you still you ask me is it true? i have no intention of deluding you i have never wanted anyone more than you and in your arms in your heart in your soul i have finally made it home here is where i belong a love that is so very strong and i know that my heart could never be wrong your heartbeat drifts me into my sleep there in my dreams loves safety net i keep and never again painful tears to weep i give myself over to your loving touch you have shown me o so much can you hear me in my mind read my thoughts they echo whispers to you searching your soul is all i want to do because i know that you love me too Julie :) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'your heartbeat drifts me into my sleep there in my dreams loves safety net' Another one to which I can also relate, JulieAnn! I love it. Great flow!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
you have a wonderful style, and this was a wonderful read. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A gift truly given. . . This is wonderful Julie. . .you know, your style reminds me of Peter McWilliams. . . a poet who writes wonderful love poems in this same one-to-four words a line style. . . you should look him up. . .  Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ "i have never wanted anyone more than you and in your arms in your heart in your soul i have finally made it home" .......beautiful......... -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
a beautiful poem... i enjoyed it very much.. Thanks A smile a day helps you work , rest & play. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
such beautiful expression from such a beautiful young lady! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all so much...I have been away from netpots for a couple of months spending time with a wondrful man I hav fallen head over feet for....it is INCREDIBLE....so I was inspired to get back on here and write of him....i am glad you all enjoyed it....thanx again.....Julie  Julie :) |
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