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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2000-10-29 09:57 PM



     The fear begins with
     shadows of the night.
     Shadows that cause lost souls
     to be filled with fright.

     Shadows dancing on the wall
     not knowing if their real,
     wondering if it will devour you
     or will you become it's next meal.

     Hearing rattling windows
     and such a ghastly sound,
     making your mind race
     and your heart begins to pound.

     Are demons waiting there
     hidden in the murk?
     Are they around every corner,
     do you wonder where they lurk?

     Your heart becomes filled with fear
     you pray for the morning light,
     you can run, but you can not hide
     from the shadows of the night.


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-10-29 10:49 PM


Very appropriate for the season, Gentle Spirit. I wouldn't like to run into one of those shadows...

Elizabeth
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Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-10-29 10:52 PM


Now I'M GONNA HAVE TO SLEEP WITH THE LIGHT ON AGAIN. OCTOBER IS ALWAYS MY HIGHEST ELECTRIC BILL. NICE READ.BOO.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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3 posted 2000-10-29 10:59 PM


Gentle Spirit,

Spooky, spooky verse!! Just perfect for the chill of these shadowy autumn nights! Thank you ~

Rainydays (turning on a night light!)

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4 posted 2000-10-30 12:56 PM


GentleSpirit~
Perfect descriptions of the shadows that lurk in our nights.
~*Marge*~



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5 posted 2000-10-30 07:35 PM


Excellent GS. . .

They are everywhere. . . watching us. . . this one gives me a chill. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 2000-10-30 07:40 PM


GS~ this is really great and perfect for this time of year!!   -SEA
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