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Today's the day
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Today's the day |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Today's the day, you're going home Flying across the ocean It sounded almost long enough To have you here four weeks with us Now you're gone; I'm feeling blue Tears sliding down; missing you I wish you didn't have to go I hope somehow at last you know Wherever you go; you take me too Because my heart belongs to you Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flows so beautifully Peppermint! Such a sadness when we have to say goodbye, lovely expression in this piece!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I feel the sadness of a long distance romance.miles between.miles apart. a bridge we build to connect the heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
always so happy on the arrival day..and so sad on the departing..i have been through this myself..nicely written Peppermint.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thanks Kit; yes it's sad to say goodbye, so I just chose to say... until later Yep, Ron....building the bridge and it's getting stronger every day...it's going to have to be strong to walk across the water  laughs Thank you Victoria!! Yes, and how time flies!!! < !signature--> Peppermint Life is a Wheel [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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