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Dressing Down

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 10-29-2000 06:33 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts

Dressing Down

Sitting here in my naked thoughts,
letting them warm my cold.
Dressing down, this lonely night,
myself becoming bold.
Wondering now, if skin to skin
feelings would soon take hold,
When offering myself to you,
a blending to unfold.

Resting in my naked thoughts,
a stirring taking place.
Inside desires rising up,
at mystifying pace.
Visions forming photo-like,
filling nighttimes space,
Wondering if these thoughts of you
my morning light, shall grace.


~Wynter Bliss
© Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 10-29-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


An exquisite entrance to Passions...Welcome
and I'm looking forward to many more from
you in the future~
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 10-29-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A most lovely entry into Passions, Welcome! Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ


Irish Rose
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3 posted 10-29-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Welcome to Passions. Thank goodness we don't need to be dressed to write poetry!
Depending on where you live it could be cold though.  Look forward to reading more!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 10-29-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Welcome to Passions Nakdthoughts! What a beautiful first post ... a lovely flow complimented by such tender sentiments. I hope to read more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 10-29-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

BDC- thank you for the lovely welcome *S

Karilea (Sunshine) what a beautiful name-  I enjoyed the card very much, it was sweet of you.

Kathleen (Irish Rose)- oh it's a bit brisk this morning..I did have to layer myself a bit. *smiling*


~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

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6 posted 10-29-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for peppermint35   Email peppermint35   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peppermint35

What an absolutely inspiring read!!!  Looking forward to more....soon!

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel
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7 posted 10-29-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Resting in my naked thoughts,
a stirring taking place.
Inside desires rising up,
at mystifying pace.
Visions forming photo-like,
filling nighttimes space,
Wondering if these thoughts of you
my morning light, shall grace.

================
Hi and add my welcome to the list ..
this is an excellent poem
very cool rhyme scheme ...
perfect cadence and flow
and I love the sensual flavor of it...
well expressed longing ...
very nice work...
I look forward to more of your words, its so nice to meet you
take care
jm


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Victoria
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8 posted 10-29-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Welcome to Passions..love the poem..you will love it here..enjoyed..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 10-29-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Welcome to Passions.
You will enjoy the talent and friendship here.

A lovely entrance you've made.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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10 posted 10-29-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Kit- thank you for your words of kindness. I hope to post more as I compose them.

peppermint- how refreshing..*S, thank you.

jm- I am  happy  to please and glad you noticed the meaning behind the written word.

~Victoria~ I know I will  enjoy it here. *S

Marge- thank you for the inviting welcome. I look forward to reading other's words.


Thank you one and all, for such a nice warm welcome.
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II



[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-29-2000).]
inot2B
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11 posted 10-29-2000 10:30 AM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

This is sweet and yet shows so much passion.
Welcome you will fit right in!
Rainydays
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12 posted 10-29-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Rainydays   Email Rainydays   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rainydays

Good morning, I admire the way in which you have brought these intimate thoughts to such rhythmic verse, the rhythm serving to add even more depth to the sensuality of the piece. A lovely poem, thank you.  

Rainydays
nakdthoughts
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inot2b- thank you for the fitting in remark.*s

Rainydays- thank you very much for the kind words and warm welcome...I love Mondays...how about you? (I have a craft business called Rainy Days 'n Mondays)
*S

~Wynter Bliss


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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Nakdthoughts-
   WELCOME!!  I know you're going
   to love it here at Passions.  
   great entrance you've made with
   this wonderful poem...i look
   forward to reading lots more
   from you.  

   -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


JamesMichael
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15 posted 10-29-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Interesting to read dressed down...ha...James
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


16 posted 10-29-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Welcome to Passions!!!!  You have made an excellent entrance with this piece and I look forward to seeing many more.
Charisma
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17 posted 10-29-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Welcome to passions....great entrance have you made..... .will look out for more.

Charisma

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-29-2000).]
Corinne
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Welcome.  A most sensuous and beautiful entrance into passion(s).

Corinne
Ron K. Fox
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A lovely poem indeed...welcome...and pull the shades down (peeking neighbors).Wynter Bliss...a lovely name.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox
nakdthoughts
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~vicky- thank you very much *s

James- you mean you dressed down for the occasion?  


Mark- thank you for the nice welcome

~Wynter Bliss


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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Charisma and Corinne- thank you both for the welcome. I look forward to reading many wonderful poems on here.


Ron- Was that you I saw looking down from the hill...My, My, I better close those blinds next time.  
Thank you for the "lovely".

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

Cerenity
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22 posted 10-31-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

HI Wynter Bliss,

This is so wonderful and the title I love, thank you for sharing, I enjoyed so much. Welcome to Passions its wonderful to have you here.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

nakdthoughts
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Cerenity- Thank you. What a wonderful welcome from you.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


24 posted 10-31-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Hi Wynter, I guess I missed this before, what a great first post. I have enjoyed everything of yours I have read.
Sandra
 
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