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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-10-29 01:47 AM


I'm a virgin, yes I am
though Deer this point you've mooted
I'm a virgin just like SPAM
and just as re-constituted.

< !signature-->

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy


[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 10-29-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware
1 posted 2000-10-29 02:05 AM


I went to the Virgin Islands - some years after - was told I was 'living in the past'
I prefer your thinking ~S~

Things which matter most must never be at the mercy of things
which matter least.

~ Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe ~

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-10-29 02:37 AM


thanks Wil, although the Virgin Islands would be nice, we could wear virgin wool and take along Mary, no not the virgin... the other one.  
Be well
Keth


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
3 posted 2000-10-29 10:27 AM


Good point and very well done!!!  After all, it's said over and over again that one can be whatever they want to be  laughs

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Sven
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4 posted 2000-10-29 02:32 PM


    

This is great Kethry!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-10-29 02:35 PM


Lynne--

this was really good. enjoyed
the read very much. as always,
take care.

amy  

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
6 posted 2000-10-29 02:52 PM


Darn that old 'deer
he should take care
where he spreads his schmeer,
I mean, how he does dare!

Think we should ferry him away
tie him to a poison oak tree,
naked as his very first day
and put honey on his knees?

We could take him to South Beach
dressed only in a pink thong,
all body parts within reach
well, would that be so wrong?

Seems he would have it coming
to take thy name in vain,
oops, we've sent him running
without a coat in Miami rain!

Cor *S*


Balladeer
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7 posted 2000-10-29 02:57 PM


Oh, Kethry, I'm so sorry
My point was not made clear.
Of course you are a virgin...
You haven't had Balladeer!!  


Corrine....honey on my knees? Pink thong? All parts within reach?? Girl, I LOVE the way you think!!!!  

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-10-29 03:02 PM


Pepper, thanks

Sven, thanks for the defense.It was a quickie in respnse to a comment 'Deer made.

Aimster, thanks for responding to this bit of nonsense.

Corinne Ouch! you wouldn't really want to do that to 'Deer would you. Then who would write poems of great passion as well as the humor. Funny poem thanks for writing it.
Kethry



Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
9 posted 2000-10-29 04:43 PM


OK too many double meanings flying around after Balladeer's comments, and I am slighty confused we don't have SPAM over here, someone may have to spell this one out for me... going to sit in the corner and think about this for a while.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

10 posted 2000-10-29 08:07 PM


I'm missing something with this one,
either that or it's been far too long since I found true ectasy in a spam sandwich. I'm going to the market--NOW< !signature-->

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-29-2000).]

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
11 posted 2000-10-29 08:13 PM


Hm... I can relate.

Oh, and btw... at MY South Beach, thongs are optional...

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
12 posted 2000-10-30 08:53 AM


Thongs optional, eh?  Hear that Deer???

LOL

Well, Kethry, seems you need to clarify the type of SPAM to which you refer, the edible kind or the email variety?

Cor

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