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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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having brushed against < !signature-->your feeling heart i cry out to you with hushed pleas that you may hear such whisper and come into my arms falling as you may into gentle lull that your anguish may be lessened as your tears spill into my receiving hands come to me with soul unsheathed and i will cloak you in my carousel embrace... -dgvarner 10-29-00 "after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
i cry out to you with hushed pleas that you may hear such whisper and come into my arms falling as you may into gentle lull that your anguish may be lessened as your tears spill into my receiving hands nice flowing sentence ... nice work |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I'm spinning with this wonderful piece. Loved it. Much love all, Krissie ~*Those words... Oh, how I long to hear ...those words Tell me...*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and i will cloak you in my carrousel embrace... ================ what a beautiful line ... lovely words written with a gentle plea I call it quiet comfort... excellent poetry D. take care jm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you have written the words that I do so long to hear....a lovely, lovely tribute of longing love.... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, it seems i'm always rediscovering your wonderful poetry. you are an angel, hopefully with a devils heart.  Parker |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dg, my carousel embrace. Ooooh I lke that, it evokes so many images. be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
dg, what a ride...I can even smell the cotton candy of probable good times... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
How can they resist..love it..  ~Victoria~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
beautifully done as usual, but what else should I expect. You flow as gentle as a brook through moss covered banks, your gentle music swaying delicate ferns beneath the dappled shade of the silent canopy. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a breath-taking flow through these lines DG ... what a wonderful lyrical quality that drifted through your words. Beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is absolutely beautiful, my friend! The lines just flow like a river of satin....  Follow your dream! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, thank you so much for writing this. There is nothing more I'd rather do then wrap myself up in this carousel embrace and briefly forget about problems of the day. Of course sweet kisses might might also be inorder. Parker |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
A lovely poem dg, my favourite lines: - 'as your tears spill into my receiving hands come to me with soul unsheathed' Jon |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, am I after the fair? Oh I love this one love, it's soooooooo gooooooood. Actually it's BRILLIANT, okay I know I shouted but I've lost my voice, truly, and I didn't want to whisper it. (I know love noisy as well as everything else.) Love this and I love all of it, but definitely that line Carosel embrace. Take care love, and be good, but not too good Bubbles< !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a heartwarming vision your carousel embrace brings. And of course it would have to be in slow motion so as to capture the moment in all of it's splendor. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful thoughts very tender, ah sigh.. wonderful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
M A..thank you much ANIKAY..happy to lend a spin  thanks for reading JANETMARIE..thank you  ..quiet comfort.. yes SERENITY..hope you hear the words youd like to hear soon thanks for reading!PARKER..rediscover all you like an angel huh.......you wanna know about my heart?? KETHRY..thanks a bunch SUNSHINE..good times--i hope a place to drain the saddness out, and envelop one in a happier space..at least for a little while VICTORIA..heres hoping "they" CANT resist RON..wow! all that?? lol what a wonderful reply.. thank you friend poet.. KIT..many thanks for such a wonderful reply SUNNY..thank you so much!! PARKER..cuddle up baby..this ones for you....(and...i'm not apposed to kisses.. )JON..thank you much BUBBLES..you shout all you want! glad you enjoyed.. COWBOY MARK..thanks and..slow motion works for me BRIAN..so good to hear from you again..thanks for reading and for your sweet reply hugs ya'll, dg |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- well look what i found back here. you KNOW i love this!! it's awesome! love the title too. love ya, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such tenderness and care placed within the lines of this DG...it's tender and beautiful along with the heart that wrote it I would think~ |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
dg, you manage to write all the things I want to write, only so much better! I'm either going to have to learn from you or quit. This is beautifully done.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Time for another embrace... Parker |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, back up you go to the top love, along with the class acts. I do love this one love, is soooooooo you. Am I getting exuberant again, yes very likely What the hell it's time for exuberance wouldn't you say. (All together now, one two three, YES!) Take care love Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know about embraces...but carousel embraces I know not...I would be willing to try this at least once to see what this is all about...sounds like it would be a carnival ride to remember...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..glad you like appreciate your 'before-posting' input |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oops! didnt mean to hit that submit button yet! so...hugs to you tricks! butterflies..many thanks for such a wonderful reply.. when a friend touches my heart..i find that inspiration alone writes these things mar..by all means..DONT QUIT! thanks mar for ALL your sweet replies! always good to hear from you parker..come on back anytime love puppy bubbles..exuberance is you my friend and i love that about you! thanks thanks thanks!jm...carasoul embraces...theyre filled with happiness--a safe haven to let the tears fall away..for a little while ... find you one my friend--or perhaps..parker will loan this one thanks for reading! hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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