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An Impossible Love
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An Impossible Love |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 An impossible love…with two oceans between… Two hearts meet the challenge, and join their two dreams… An impossible love…is dependent upon… all the modern devices, which sometimes go wrong… An impossible love…worth it’s weight in pure gold… Satisfies, and sustains, but it’s so hard to hold… An impossible love…can be worth holding on… If let go too soon, all the pain lingers on… An impossible love…can walk out or hold tight… Leave tears on the pillow, or sweet dreams at night… An impossible love…who can say that it’s wrong? Puts a smile on the face, in the heart…a new song… An impossible love…hear it’s voice, hear it’s plea… Across the wide oceans, it beckons to me… An impossible love… Follow your dream! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sometimes the strongest loves are seen as impossible but love is love and if it is real love then it is worth what ever you need to do to capture it and hold on to it. WONDERFUL VERSE and your graphics just keep getting better and better. Any news yet on the contest? Later my sweet friend. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
An impossible love perhaps... but there are no impossible dreams... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ Love is never impossible when it is true love!! This is beautiful!  -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny= this is beautiful, my friend. as those before me have said, true love is not impossible...it just may take a bit of effort and a lot of belief. love this. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes sometimes when you love..no matter how deep..it is impossible to be with each other..because of commitments ..i know so many that have impossible loves...i love this Sunny.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh so beautiful Sunny1, with a dream in your heart....nothing's impossible! Bonnie |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I think of all I know who have found love on the internet...how hard it is... but where there's a dream...there's hope. Never give up on love. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Donna, this is lovely, I sent it to my sister-in-law. She met her one true love who lives in Pakistan, she in Indiana, and she flew 10,000 miles to spend two of the most amazing weeks of her life with him and she'll never be the same. She may never see him again....but oh, the memories... I know she'll love this, thank you for it.< !signature--> "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is sweet, and I still think love is worth anything. But it sure hurts when anything and everything is not enough.. Written beautifully, as always. And the graphic is stunning. Sandra |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
After enough broken hearts it feels like impossible...but then when the truest love of all happens the broken hearts don't matter. Excellent work~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ Yes, I agree......real love is always worth holding onto. And they are choosing judges for the contest as I write....it should be soon now. I have my fingers crossed!! Thank you, my brother......  ~~~ Jamie ~~~ No, there are no impossible dreams....and I know that dreams sometimes come true. I've always been a dreamer....but that's what makes life so interesting!! Thank you, Jamie! ~~~ SEA ~~~ Oh, thank you so much for reading and your reply! I do appreciate it very much! ~~~ Vicky ~~~ Yes, the key word is belief! Always believe. What the mind of man can believe, he can achieve! Thank you! ~~~ Victoria ~~~ It is never easy, but nothing in life ever really is.......I thank you, my friend... Follow your dream! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunny1, Well phrased , written, and felt. Doc |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful rhythm and flow to these beautiful words Sunny! You've captured such lovely sentiments in this piece ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Bonnie ~~~ It is so important to keep that dream alive in your heart......nurture it, and watch it grow! ~~~ Ron ~~~ Love does exist on the Internet, yes, and where there are people..there will be hearts and feelings. It's good to see people taking technology and giving it that human touch! Thank you!! ~~~ Kathleen ~~~ Oh, I am so glad that you sent this to your sister-in-law!! I think, after her experience, it will mean exactly what I felt when I wrote it. Wish her well for me!! ~~~ Sandra ~~~ What you are describing is the part that feels impossible. And for every negative there is a positive, that is life's balance. Hold onto your dream, my friend.... ~~~ Butterflies ~~~ Oh, your words are so wise, and so very true.It is just sad that so many people give up their dream just as it is coming into view! I thank you, my friend! ~~~ Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Doc ~~~ Thank you, and I am glad to see you here! ~~~ Kit ~~~ Oh, I do appreciate your nice reply, and am really glad that you liked what I wrote! Follow your dream! |
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