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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2000-10-28 03:34 PM




If it bumps in the night
beside my bed
I pull the covers
over my head.

If it bumps in the night
inside my room
I go to the corner
and get the broom.

If it bumps in the night
outside my house
I call 911 to come
get that mouse!






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Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-28 03:39 PM


Cute, Sharon!! While you're at it, I have a mouse or two that you are welcome to!!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-10-28 03:41 PM



Sharon-
   LOL...lovin' this one.  
   too cute.  

   -vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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3 posted 2000-10-28 03:44 PM


PoetdeVine~
Ewwwwwwww !
I don't like meeces either !
Call Balladeer !
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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4 posted 2000-10-28 03:47 PM


Ohhhh Balladeer.....a few of us have a mice problem.....HELP!!  
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-10-28 03:54 PM


Cute Sharon, I enjoyed this! Boy I've had my share of mice, and then some ... used to live in a century home in the country ... Eeeeek!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2000-10-28 04:09 PM


We don't do mice--- only cats....lol



Jamie

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7 posted 2000-10-28 04:13 PM


PdV~ This is so cute.....I can't stand the sound of mice, they can be cute and all but the sounds they make are gross! This was fun to read.   -SEA
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8 posted 2000-10-28 05:58 PM


LOL. . . this was great deVine!!!

I'm not a big fan of mice either. . .  

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9 posted 2000-10-28 06:02 PM



Poet deVine, A seasonal treat...a pleasure to read.

Robert Joseph

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10 posted 2000-10-28 06:19 PM


*lol*.....omg, a mouse.....mmm....I use one for my puter, can't without it....so no 911 for me....enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

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11 posted 2000-10-28 06:23 PM


....sending cat....[and by the way, I don't recall your "Movie Review" showing Meeting the Parents and for a good, enjoyable laugh...it's a must...and if you can't go...rent it when it comes out on video...

Karilea
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12 posted 2000-10-28 09:07 PM


EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK MICE


but this poem is wonderful Sharon, yeah call 911 and ask for Jamie hahahaha (seeing he doesnt do mice)we'll call him anyway LOL  

I enjoyed very much Sharon  

Maree

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13 posted 2000-10-28 09:22 PM


poet DeVine - Tonight do not look under your bed, I repeat; do not look under your bed. For there is a bump thing in the night, or is that a thing that bumps in the night? So, make sure all the lights are on, get that big black kitty kat, and put him under that bed, but keep in mind, the mouse might find him!

BC

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14 posted 2000-10-28 09:42 PM


Eeek a mouse! *quickly dodge's out of its path* Very cute, Sharon, made me laugh!  

Elizabeth


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Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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15 posted 2000-10-28 09:59 PM


lol hilarious. good one!
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16 posted 2000-10-29 09:24 AM


this tickled me..I think this morning I heard one of those sounds in my kitchen.

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17 posted 2000-10-29 09:50 AM


Very cute!!!  Not so cute when one of the little darlings scampers across your foot in the night.....but...I see I need a cat!!!

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18 posted 2000-10-30 09:10 AM


With two cats, a mouse doesn't dare enter my place unless it has a death wish. *G* But this is great!
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19 posted 2000-10-30 11:45 AM


spooky and fun yuh yuh
Sudhir Iyer
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20 posted 2000-10-31 06:09 AM


Kwite bunderphul!

regards,
sudhir

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21 posted 2000-10-31 06:26 AM


Sharon,
don't scream, it's only me bumping this in the night, so others get to see your light  
Kethry


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22 posted 2000-10-31 06:14 PM


Halloweeny Bump in the Night!!




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