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He Haunts Me
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He Haunts Me |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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~He haunts my soul~ Knowing my weaknesses it's really not hard for him he moves through the night ~touching me~ letting me know he is still there I'm still his ~He haunts my heart~ He's taken the time for searching he knows what makes me ache he knows the words I need to hear then, on a whisper, he taunts me always with the wicked knowledge that I will be his ~ yet again ~He haunts my dreams~ He knows in which fantasy I hide he's already there.........waiting Ohhh and he'll play that song and I will fall into the dance just like he knew I would ~all along~ -SEA- |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This has a lovely lyrical flow SEA ... very nicely penned, I really enjoyed your thoughts in this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, SEA! Denise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, beautiful as ever love, lovely flow, and it's fabulous. Yes I love this one, what did I say, never ever have you written something that is less than perfect. Oh yes I think this one, is one of my favourites. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Ohhhhh, yeah ! And this one sings itself when we don't think we even remember the melody ! A beautiful, beautiful write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like a moth to his flame ... I am ever his to claim. somethings never leave us ... never change, nor do we ever wish ... from this to be estranged. Somethings stay inside us like a treasured curse.. we embrace the memory and then define it in our verse. jm =================== I LOVE this poem Sea-girl... it is mystic and haunting and enchanting and its melody is poetry in motion VERY COOL WRITE!! dont ya just love when they get under our skin *winkiewinkie* later-going there again-gator  jm [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Not only have you been in my mind...you have been in my dreams as well... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, It sings like a song and that's really strong Nice write. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kit~ thank you so much Denise~ thanks Marsha~ wow, thank you, that is so nice Marge~ I'm so glad you liked this Janet~ under the skin is so right, thank you for reading Paula~ we must be on the same wave length! Seymour~ cool, thank you -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- this is really beautiful. i love it much. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~SEA~ this is so beautiful.....I love it...the whole poem, wonderful penned.....as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
SEA, yes..just marvelous, absolutely intoxicating. Keep singing, we'll keep reading!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* There's always that one that knows every button and every emotion and how to play each one...*sighs* this was beautiful yet bitter- sweet...excellent work~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh baby, you figured me out!!! Now come here and gimme a great big kiss!!  |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky~ thank you, I'm happy you stopped in  Charisma~ you are always so sweet, thank you P35~ I think I'll leave the singing to someone else,I'd make your head hurt!! But thank you just the same  BDC~ yes......exactly......just when I least expect it too.... Mark~ I love that graphic! Too funny! Come here Cowboy, pucker up!! -SEA |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very well done SEA-- nice statement on how it feels to have someone know you are there when they want you. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jamie~ Sometimes, I wish I wasn't so easy to see through........but then I don't like to play games.....thank you for reading. -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You mean you were serious when you said to come there and pucker up? ON my way baby!!!!  |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ If I wasn't married, I'd be as serious as a heart attack!! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
There is always that one little catch isn't there? LOL. Oh well, drat it anyways. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ yes, but I do so love that catch!! Kisses sweetie!! -SEA |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Guess it's that time of year... Great poem! Deb |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BR~ thank you -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I know you are hon' or I wouldn't even be here teasing you. You are one special lady as I have said many times and I will continue being quite happy with the hugs and kisses in the blue pages. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ I know, and I am so glad you tease and play with me anyways..you are so much fun and your teasing and kisses make my heart happy. Thank you sweet friend........ -SEA |
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