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Uncertainty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Uncertainty Me, sitting here in the corner biting my lip wondering what will happen next. Should I seek shelter or stand in your view, do I shelter myself under a blanket of humility or stand proudly exposed? Will you devour me just to toss me aside or will you feast upon me and swallow me down into the depths of you? Will you consume my soul so that I may be one with you or will you send me to the fires of Hades? Tonight when you are done with me will I be your sweet angel or just the she left discarded to be alone- with thoughts of her own uncertainty? < !signature--> On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
GS~ I really like this......I've felt this way so many times in my life.......geez, I guess that means I was a fickle girl  not really,  Awesome poem.  -SEA |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Very well written...keep dreamin' darling, sometimes they just don't know. Good write. Marcy |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Gentle Spirit, its hard to believe that we would put ourselves into situations like this; but we certainly do! A thought prevoking poem, thanks Jon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful GS. . . I agree with Marcy. . . keep dreaming. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I don't think it means we are ever really fickly, but more so it just proves we are human, with human thoughts and emotions. Thanks Sea. Alle, so true. I think sometimes they honestly don't know just how it is we feel, or perhaps they just don't want to know. Thanks. Jon, sometimes the situations just occur wether we want them to or not.....lol.....the trick is recognizing when it is a situation. Thanks. Ah Sven, yes.......our dreams are what carries us, so yes, I agree. We all must keep dreaming. Thanks.  |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I think this is how we all feel, some of the time, most of the time....great write!! Definitely keep on dreaming....the best dreams have a way of coming true Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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