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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I can't go on like this, Not living without you, I want this night to go on like this, I can't ..., Everytime, When music begans, My tears starts to fall, And loneliness starts to calls too, I don't know what to do without you, So I can't wait to fall in love with you all over again No,no, I can't wait to call out for your name again, I want these years and days go by , And let you come Into my life again, I can't go on like this, Not living without you, I want this night to go on, You close to me, I can't go on, like this forever, I want the love to remain the same, I can't........., |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ But, oh .... you can write it sooooooo beautifully. Lovely, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A very heartfelt write. Hope you don't have to wait, hope your hapiness never ends. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love can hurt, can't it? Very well expressed, Vandana! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the pain comes through the writing...well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written and expressed Vandana... I really like this poem. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Vandana-- this poem struck home with me. beautiful yet the pain comes shining through in this piece. i say "shining" because you wrote it so elegantly. take care. great poem! amy  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ this made me ache right along with you..beautifully done -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,everyone!!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful vandana. . .it hurts when we realize this doesn't it?? --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vandana these are tender longings that I hope will find fulfillment and happiness...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vandana~ Felt your pain and your longing, I hope everything turns out right for you winged ~HUGS~ floating your way Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all!!!!!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ouch...it is hard I know...believe me I know. The time just never seems to take away soon enough the pain of a lost love, but instead one hour seems as if it turns into two. Powerfully sad, but beautifully penned. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your heartache sounds through your words, and mine ache with you. ((warm hugs)) take care.....Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you for your knid words!!!!! |
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