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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-10-28 11:07 AM


The Kiss

There is the kiss and then there's the kiss
Those that hit and those that miss.
Of those that are laid on
And those that are played on.

The one that engrossed to me the most
Was one of a dreams milepost.
Impossible in time
And still it rings my chime.

It came to me in a scene and seem
A rhyme a verse and a dream.
An impossible coup.
Impossible but true

And at the end of my silver thread
A wish of mine I thought dead.
But it kissed me to live
And freed me of captive.

The kiss was like the damp of the mist
Fragile moist and soft with insist.
Soul touched soul at the core
And then there was no more.

And dry winds sweep the plain
And the desert is back again.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-10-28 11:13 AM


Seymour~
Oh ...

'The kiss was like the damp of the mist
Fragile moist and soft with insist.
Soul touched soul at the core
And then there was no more.'


But ... when it lays in your memory like this,
it must have been a BEAUT !
*Wink*
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 2000-10-28 11:13 AM


quote:

The kiss was like the damp of the mist
                      Fragile moist and soft with insist.


How do you do that?  Wow...


Karilea
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Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-10-28 11:32 AM


And at the end of my silver thread
A wish of mine I thought dead.
But it kissed me to live
And freed me of captive.

The kiss was like the damp of the mist
Fragile moist and soft with insist.
Soul touched soul at the core
And then there was no more.

And dry winds sweep the plain
And the desert is back again.
==================
this poetic kiss rings my chimes and a couple bells too  
my oh my what an amazing set of poetic lips
spoke this....

"The kiss was like the damp of the mist
Fragile moist and soft with insist."

man oh man...it dont get no better than "soft insist" baby...
very cool Sy-guy...very...
later-mystic-lip-gator
jm


Denise
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4 posted 2000-10-28 11:40 AM


*SMOOCHES*  

Beautiful poem, Sy!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-10-28 12:44 PM


Marge,
It was a beaut. *L*

Karilea,
Thank you for the WOW. *L*

JM,
I think I hear the chimes. Winkiewinkie *L*

Dsnyder,
And Smooches to you. *L*

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2000-10-28 02:07 PM


Pretty poem
Throwing you kisses
Hope it helps
Liz

SEA
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7 posted 2000-10-28 02:12 PM


Seymour~ this is really wonderful......

Kiss me a little
Kiss me long
Kiss me powerful
Kiss me strong........


-SEA

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2000-10-28 02:14 PM


OOHHHHH yeah...felt this one clear to my toes...
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2000-10-28 10:21 PM


Elizabeth,
Thanks for the kisses. Sy

Sea,
Kiss, kiss, kiss.

Paula,
Such a nice comment.

Alle'cram
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10 posted 2000-10-28 11:25 PM


Seymour,
  This is wonderful. Very cute..some smooch!

"There is the kiss and then there's the kiss
Those that hit and those that miss.
Of those that are laid on
And those that are played on."


vlraynes
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11 posted 2000-11-09 01:47 AM



Seymour-
  wow..that sounds like one
  heck of a kiss.  
  this is just wonderful!  
  i love it.  

  -vicky


  


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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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12 posted 2000-11-09 08:39 PM


Beautiful, Sy!
It is truly a pleasure to be able to read your work.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2000-11-10 08:11 AM


Alle'Cram,
Sorry it took so long to thank you.

Vicky,
Thanks for the WOW.

Temptress,
Thanks for the beautiful.

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