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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Tears had fallen, angry words spoken Our souls opened and our hearts broken ~*~ Then in a moment we fell to the pain We came to the crossroads....leave or remain ~*~ The answer would be either bandage or knife The single most important decision we’d make in our life ~*~ You looked into my eyes as I opened my heart One final chance to end....or to start ~*~ Locked in silence for years...keeping part of me from you But now there was no question...I knew just what to do ~*~ It was time to release the chains...free these bars I’d let you unlock the doors and heal the scars ~*~ Seeing each other finally...from the inside out The decision then to try...came without doubt ~*~ Hope shined bonding your heart and soul to mine The answer was so clear.....we’d make it...together this time |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Seeing each other finally...from the inside out The decision then to try...came without doubt ======================= that line says it all my SS of heart ... life doesnt always offer second chances .. we can only grow and learn from the things we discover in ourselves when one does come our way ... gently written poem of a promise to be kept ... beautiful reflection of your heart... but then what else can we expect from a butterfly HMMMM???   yayayaya I KNOW ...(can you say mood swing)LOL  me aint scared (much) hehe me loves ya me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies--A very tender and hope-filled poem...I am happy for your happiness! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is very beautiful...I love the formation of this piece too...great job! Nathan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect deplay of the indecision in many relationships, and the turmoil to come out the other side. Looks like you have done it. I wish you great happiness. Sandra |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is a very beautiful poem, when your able to unlock the chain and bars there's a freedom of which you've never seen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah little one, finding your true heart is all that counts... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So very happy for you both my friend. I know that you two will make it and I am smiling very big. ====================================================  Share Your GiftThe time has come from all you have learned For you to share all the things that you have yearned The gift is you and all that resides within your soul All the trials and tribulations that have taken their toll This is where all this care with you has been driven This is why the love bestowed upon you has been given You now know the strength that is encased in your being As you begin your new life; finally, for the first time seeing You have been taught how to love and to let one love you You have reached the pinnacles of stars from honesty's view You hold within your heart the power of tomorrow's glow So go and teach all the lessons of love you have come to know There is "one" residing within the reach of your beautiful wings Sharing the garden where the heart of the butterfly so often sings Trust in the heart within you and the one so close at your side Love to learn and learn to love with the one in which you reside There are the stars of that one night in which we forever hold The story of two becoming one kissing warmth from eyes so cold Poured forth from salted tears resting on that deck in luna's light We forever touched as soul-mates were joined in that forgiving night Mark Bohannan [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly-- my heart smiled really big when i read this. i am so happy that you are getting a 2nd chance. as jan said, they don't come around very often. i really think things will be okay for you now-- i surely do hope. as always you will be in my thoughts and prayers. beautiful poem my friend! take care. amy  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly...I am so very happy for you..good luck |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ (((APPLAUDING))) I love this and without a doubt, this is my favorite of yours. Wonderful!! -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
SS* Thanks sweetie..and you are very right, second chances don't come along very often, so when they do ya better hold on with both hands...which is what I plan on doing~ Martie* Thank you so much~ Nate* I appreciate your kindness, thank you~ Sandra* Well this time there seems to be light at the end of the tunnel Thank you~RB* With my hard head it takes a while to get the message Thank you so much~Sunshine* Many thanks...yes that is all that counts...and not finding it to late Mark* I know you are..and that means alot to me...your poetic reply is beautiful my friend~ Amy* Thank you sweetie...as always your comments touch my heart~ Paula* Thank you...I'm pretty happy too What a strange feeling...lolSea* What a very nice thing to say...thank you from the bottom of my heart~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Hope shined bonding your heart and soul to mine The answer was so clear.....we’d make it...together this time Beautiful poem BDC, so tender and full of hope. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your heart shines brilliantly in this tender and inspirational piece Butterflies. A very beautiful writing filled with hopes and dreams, I really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
To reach the crossroads, to recognise the opportunity and then to grasp hold of it. Well done my friend, you know my thoughts are with you. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
((warm hugs))...I am so happy for you, and wish you all the love and luck in this second change....you have expressed your feelings so well in this wonderful and beautiful piece. Take care hon~ Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet butterflies what a beautiful ending, this is so tender and beautiful. very heartfelt winged ~HUGS~ floating your way Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Locked in silence for years...keeping part of me from you But now there was no question...I knew just what to do' Wonderful poem, butterflies! And, good luck, too!! It always works out when you try it together. sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Brian* It's always like so nice to see you around here....like sunshine my friend, thank you! Kit* Thank you from the bottom of my heart~ Eagle* As mine are with you my friend...with hope and the belief of those fairy tales we can achieve anything~ Charisma* Thank you so much for your kind thoughts...you touched my heart today~ Tracie* Always the sweetest you can be Thank you so very much~SP* It helps when you do it together...otherwise there is no reason to try is there....thank you so much for reading and your kind reply~ |
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